Haiku (creatures of the ark)
A Haiku for the club challenge12 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Two action words: queue and swings are present to describe the movement of animals that Noah had way back in early Biblical times. I am thinking this poem subtly points out how animals definitely possess intelligence to line up to drink water instead of just pushing their way in. Maybe they were smarter back then, or at least arguably smarter than some humans. The monkeys, of course, found something to do while they were waiting.
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Two action words: queue and swings are present to describe the movement of animals that Noah had way back in early Biblical times. I am thinking this poem subtly points out how animals definitely possess intelligence to line up to drink water instead of just pushing their way in. Maybe they were smarter back then, or at least arguably smarter than some humans. The monkeys, of course, found something to do while they were waiting.
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Wouldn't it be spectacular to see all of the animals that Noah had in the ark? I like your word play with the "monkey swings". Great picture choice!
que at the last water hole (queue) if you mean to line up
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Wouldn't it be spectacular to see all of the animals that Noah had in the ark? I like your word play with the "monkey swings". Great picture choice!
que at the last water hole (queue) if you mean to line up
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, and help, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
