BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "Willow Trees Over the Pond"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
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Comment from RJ Heritage
This continues the theme very well as it features another important aspect that joint the koi on the pond. Bringing highlight to the goings on in and underage water.
RzJ
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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This continues the theme very well as it features another important aspect that joint the koi on the pond. Bringing highlight to the goings on in and underage water.
RzJ
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from lyenochka
Love your personification of the willow "caressing water with leaves." They are such elegant trees and often convey peace and comfort. Great use of alliteration, too in your 7-7 stanza.
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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Love your personification of the willow "caressing water with leaves." They are such elegant trees and often convey peace and comfort. Great use of alliteration, too in your 7-7 stanza.
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister ❤️ 😘 🙏 💙
Love,
Marival
