Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i like cows... the taste very good on a bun with mustard and cheese and lettuce ;-)

a great moooooving haiku!
cool imagery and smooth flow
no spag or typos

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)


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 Comment Written 28-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024

Thank you very much, 😊

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That's cute! The animal from which we mostly get our milk from is following the Milky Way! I am glad we have such helpful animals in our human lives.

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 Comment Written 28-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024

I like cows, I wish all farmers let their caws wander free to pasture. The ones held in constrictive structures are awful. The same with chickens. It's so inhumane.

Thank you very much, 😊Big Sister.

Love,

MariVal