Hellitree
The battle between fire and Humitree20 total reviews
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This poem tells a very suspenseful story that draws the reader's interest and keeps them hooked. I was happy with the ending, but sad that the story wasn't longer. Maybe at some point you could lengthen this into a longer piece. If you do, please let me know.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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This poem tells a very suspenseful story that draws the reader's interest and keeps them hooked. I was happy with the ending, but sad that the story wasn't longer. Maybe at some point you could lengthen this into a longer piece. If you do, please let me know.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you, that's a good suggestion. Actually, I may just do that. I was thinking about having all these poems is part of a story. The one they were created up until the time they had the force on fire. It will continue. I think I will bring in some new characters too. Maybe they have a conflict or something. We'll see. Monica, thank you for your time. I thank you for your fine words. I'm for the great rating two I hope you have a very happy new year!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is an excellent rhyming poem, Lea. The words you choose to rhyme are very creative and tell a story of Humanitree and how the whole family bursts into flames only to be doused by water from a clear, running stream.
This provides wonderful imagery, and the artwork is amazingly realistic, as the family of three holds up during a fire.
Jesse
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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This is an excellent rhyming poem, Lea. The words you choose to rhyme are very creative and tell a story of Humanitree and how the whole family bursts into flames only to be doused by water from a clear, running stream.
This provides wonderful imagery, and the artwork is amazingly realistic, as the family of three holds up during a fire.
Jesse
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Jesse. Nice to see you here! Once again you've given me a fine review! Thank you so much for that. I really appreciate it.And I really hope that you had a good christmas! I'm thinking, I'll introduce some new characters. Maybe something they would have a conflict with. So we'll see how it folds up, so it's going to be a story. All right, it's looking like we got some good start here. Thank you again for your career. Your encouragement, your kind words. In your time, most of all, have an awesome night!
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You're welcome, Lea.
Go with adding some new characters, I think that is a good idea. Readers like conflict. Use your creative imagination.
It will take you far.
I walked last night with a walker. It was awesome!
I hope you had a fantastic night, as well!
Jesse
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Ah, this handsome Humitree family has been saved from those flames that threatened their demise. And Girlitree is the saviour, adapting her hand to a tube to siphon water from the pond. I've grown so fond of these characters, Lea, so this is a time to celebrate and even add to their beautiful family? I wondered if Girlitree needed the ('s) Another excellent and original post. Well done, Lea, and good luck! Warm wishes, Debbie
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Ah, this handsome Humitree family has been saved from those flames that threatened their demise. And Girlitree is the saviour, adapting her hand to a tube to siphon water from the pond. I've grown so fond of these characters, Lea, so this is a time to celebrate and even add to their beautiful family? I wondered if Girlitree needed the ('s) Another excellent and original post. Well done, Lea, and good luck! Warm wishes, Debbie
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Yes, there's going to be an expansion, and I believe in introduction of new characters.Maybe they might have a conflict with these new characters. I thank you for your kind words.As always, i'm happy to see you here! You always have such cool things to say, and you're very encouraging.I so appreciate that! Hope your christmas was awesome and that your new year's is fabulous!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Lea,
Another awesome Humitree poem. I'm glad that the family was able to get to water and get saved. Wonderful picture. Do you use AI to make them?
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Lea,
Another awesome Humitree poem. I'm glad that the family was able to get to water and get saved. Wonderful picture. Do you use AI to make them?
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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I actually use multiple art programs. I create the light, the colors the general outline and then start to fill it in based on an idea that I have to match the poem and then it run through multiple filters, take away blur and add clarity. Sometimes I might change the shading or the filter.But I like to make them, they're pretty cool. Thank you so much for asking. I appreciate your time as always. I want to look at that doggy on there.He looks so cool too! Thank you again. I hope your Christmas was amazing. I hope your new year's even better!
Comment from Jim Wile
Ah, yes. The scourge of forests and people everywhere--forest fires. And especially vulnerable now is this new race of Humitrees. At least they have the ability to find a pond and jump in to extinguish the flames, unlike trees who are rooted to the ground and must accept what comes their way. Another need episode chronicling this new race. Loved the picture too, Lea.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Ah, yes. The scourge of forests and people everywhere--forest fires. And especially vulnerable now is this new race of Humitrees. At least they have the ability to find a pond and jump in to extinguish the flames, unlike trees who are rooted to the ground and must accept what comes their way. Another need episode chronicling this new race. Loved the picture too, Lea.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thanks, Jim. That's super kind of you to say. I have fun making those pictures. And I like to make them according to the idea of the poem that I have in my head, that perpetuates it on even a little bit more. I hope your Christmas was grand I really appreciate you taking the time to do this and offer your kind words you're reading lunch time. May your new year's be amazing!
Comment from Begin Again
Your imagination is working at full speed and developing these intriguing stories. Now we have a family, using their wits and skills to battle together to save their lives from the raging fire. Very well done.
Smiles, Carol
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Your imagination is working at full speed and developing these intriguing stories. Now we have a family, using their wits and skills to battle together to save their lives from the raging fire. Very well done.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Again, i'm so happy to see your review.Here you always make me smile. Thank you for that.Smiles are hard to come by sometimes! I'm also pleased that you like these poems. It's good acknowledgement and very uplifting too. Hope that you're having a good evening.Hope that all your days are great!
Comment from Tim Margetts
This is getting really interesting, Lea
So after the threat of the fire, as I understand it, the manitree has taken water and evolved into a form that can use its mutation ability to become the humitree. Now protected from its nemesis by the power or water.
I love it.
Tim x
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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This is getting really interesting, Lea
So after the threat of the fire, as I understand it, the manitree has taken water and evolved into a form that can use its mutation ability to become the humitree. Now protected from its nemesis by the power or water.
I love it.
Tim x
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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As always your inside is truly great. Yeah, I think it's going somewhere and I'm thinking I'm gonna introduce some characters too. And uh, expand on, maybe a little bit.I believe it's you that got me on the road to that. Thank you again.I hope your christmas was good and that you're a new year will be amazing! We shall make more and see what happens. Thank you for your time and for your great writing.You kind comments having an amazing night!
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You are more than welcome Lea. I hope you also had a great Christmas and wish you an amazing New Year.
Tim x
Comment from patcelaw
This is a nicely, rhymed poem, and I enjoyed it very much. I wish you the very best and the rhyming poetry contest. May you have a lovely day may you also have a happy and prosperous new year. God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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This is a nicely, rhymed poem, and I enjoyed it very much. I wish you the very best and the rhyming poetry contest. May you have a lovely day may you also have a happy and prosperous new year. God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Patricia, God bless you and your family! Thank you for reading again and offering your kind words. And thank you for your time. Most of all, as it is a busy time of year, and you're time 2, is it's a busy time of year.
And I hope that your christmas was great and that your new year will be fabulous!
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, I am loving these reads, this one seems to tell of the passing down/of knowledge, as the adults show the young one how to survive, right or wrong I really like the intrigue and the way they get the mind working, very well written and presented****kahpot
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Excellent, I am loving these reads, this one seems to tell of the passing down/of knowledge, as the adults show the young one how to survive, right or wrong I really like the intrigue and the way they get the mind working, very well written and presented****kahpot
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Totally happy you're liking these! Always great to see you here! You have. We've been very encouraging and supportive. I thank you very much for that. I do get a lot of that in the world, so it's a great gift. I hope you're Christmas was good and that you have an amazing New Year. I'm going to introduce some new characters too. I think have a great night!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We often use wood to keep ourselves warm and once they are gone, they are gone forever. I enjoyed your inventive story here Lea, love Dolly x x x x x x
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We often use wood to keep ourselves warm and once they are gone, they are gone forever. I enjoyed your inventive story here Lea, love Dolly x x x x x x
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Dolly i'm so happy to see you! I hope that your christmas was amazing.And your new year has to be fabulous. I'm glad you liked this poem.There's a few now and I think that i'm going to add some characters! I'm also hard at work finishing book two. I fly to Phoenix to accept the international impact. Look award. It's all very surreal. Thank you again for your kind words, awesome rating in your time.Most of all, it's a busy time of year! Have a great night!
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I am enjoying your inventive story Lea x x x
