Comment from bhogg

Excellent

Short and poignant. It's not surprising that this has stayed with you for such a long time. People can be cruel, sometimes not even on purpose. I'll try and revisit some of your other posts. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024

Comment from Rick Gardner

Excellent

Sorry to read this as the experience still follows you and you want an answer that probably never be answered. Sounds like this is more of a problem for her than you. Love the ones in your world now.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024

Comment from Julie G1

Excellent

Great vignette, well composed. The writer has chosen a succinct imagery and language to convey a mystery. The beautiful graphic added to the impact of this tale. Hope you succeed.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024

Comment from Gunner Lil

Excellent

A great picture used for this work.
A very easy read that told a lot. A very good flow and pace.
I would not waste any time on this person.
Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024

Thanks for the review.