Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

I enjoyed this short but meaningful poem. Believing is a choice. We choose to have faith. And worrying is the biggest waste of everyone's time. It serves no real purpose. Thanks for sharing.

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024

Thanks Marilyn, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That fits perfectly with part 22, Roy. I really like this. The two lines pack a great message into the words. We all have choice it is God given. Well done, my friend. :) Sandra xx

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024

Thanks Sandra, for these excellent comments and very kind review, blessings Roy

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Very strong meaning in such a short verses, but very comprehensive. Tge presentation is stunning and compliments the idea quite well. Thanks for sharing.I really must make the time to get into the Renga before it ends.
RJ

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024

Thanks RJ, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

Roy,

This is an awesome poem. The two lines speak volumes about worrying. I am like you I would rather believe then worry. It's true that worrying shaves time off your life.

Well done

Cecilia

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024

Thanks Cecilia, for these wonderful comments and review, blessings Roy

reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 06-Dec-2024

Roy,

You're welcome

Cecilia

Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Exceptional

This is the best Renga I've seen, Roy. Instead of just a statement, you've given us something philosophical. "Worrying is but a thief". I'm going to use this in the future when friends and family (and myself) are worrying about something.

You have two periods at the end of thief; you might want to get rid of one.

Well done, Roy. I just told someone I didn't see much purpose in the Renga, but you have changed my mind.

xo
Pam

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024

Thanks Pam, for these wonderful comments and beautiful review, blessings Roy

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent, yes, worrying is a thief of time, in most cases it takes a question to find the truth and then believing is easy, a wonderful addition to the book of renga's, very well done****kahpot

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024

Thanks kahhpot, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from Kahlani

Excellent

Hi Roy, what a clever saying. Worrying is but a thief - this is so true. It steals our time and energy. This is a phrase that people should take note of and reflect on it when they do start to worry.

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Thanks Kahlani, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy