BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Winter Feelings"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
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Comment from DonandVicki
A beautiful addition to Gypsy's renga book, I have yet to come up with an addition of my own, the art work is a perfect complement to your well composed poem. Don
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A beautiful addition to Gypsy's renga book, I have yet to come up with an addition of my own, the art work is a perfect complement to your well composed poem. Don
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from Neonewman
Frozen in flight. What a wonderfully, eerie thought. This is a great addition to Gypsy's BOOK OF RENGA POEMS. Brilliant work, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
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Frozen in flight. What a wonderfully, eerie thought. This is a great addition to Gypsy's BOOK OF RENGA POEMS. Brilliant work, my friend.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the art and your supporting words Gloria, we are experiencing the freeze just now in the UK, and the Heron is frozen in flight in your short story, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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I love the art and your supporting words Gloria, we are experiencing the freeze just now in the UK, and the Heron is frozen in flight in your short story, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is truly captivating, Gloria! Characteristically, the heron hovers, motionless, in its hunting pursuit, looking majestic and reminding us of the beauty and serenity of nature. Well done! Debbie
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This is truly captivating, Gloria! Characteristically, the heron hovers, motionless, in its hunting pursuit, looking majestic and reminding us of the beauty and serenity of nature. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully written to line poem, and I enjoyed it very much. Your photograph is superb. It is wonderful that we can capture those birds in the air as they're flying and they are frozen for all time in our photographs. Patricia.
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This is a beautifully written to line poem, and I enjoyed it very much. Your photograph is superb. It is wonderful that we can capture those birds in the air as they're flying and they are frozen for all time in our photographs. Patricia.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Yes, a photographer captured a heron, frozen in flight but who that person was will remain anonymous since Microsoft's Copilot created the image, which doesn't give the artist their name as it rightly should. The heron is a lovely bird worthy of a beautiful photograph too bad we will only see it frozen in flight in a picture instead of in nature where it is cold yet real.
Jesse
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Yes, a photographer captured a heron, frozen in flight but who that person was will remain anonymous since Microsoft's Copilot created the image, which doesn't give the artist their name as it rightly should. The heron is a lovely bird worthy of a beautiful photograph too bad we will only see it frozen in flight in a picture instead of in nature where it is cold yet real.
Jesse
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from June Sargent
Beautiful addition to the book of renga. I'm glad Gypsy started this fun challenge. Striking imagery of a heron in flight. I hope more join in on the journey.
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Beautiful addition to the book of renga. I'm glad Gypsy started this fun challenge. Striking imagery of a heron in flight. I hope more join in on the journey.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and nice presentation, Gloria.
-You did a great job with your addition to the book.
-Good description of the photographer and the picture.
-A very good seasonal line with "frozen in flight."
-Very well done.
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-Great artwork and nice presentation, Gloria.
-You did a great job with your addition to the book.
-Good description of the photographer and the picture.
-A very good seasonal line with "frozen in flight."
-Very well done.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Wonderful artwork. Thanks for the share. It's been a while since I read any releases from you. Has all been well? Do tell, yes. As for me a day seemingly cannot pass without an adventure (senior falls) or a pulled muscle.
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Wonderful artwork. Thanks for the share. It's been a while since I read any releases from you. Has all been well? Do tell, yes. As for me a day seemingly cannot pass without an adventure (senior falls) or a pulled muscle.
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from lyenochka
Gorgeous picture! And your ekphrastic poem covers that heron "frozen in flight". This has so many layers, the event, the photograph capturing the heron, and then your poem capturing the photo.
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Gorgeous picture! And your ekphrastic poem covers that heron "frozen in flight". This has so many layers, the event, the photograph capturing the heron, and then your poem capturing the photo.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
