Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Teacher on the Loose"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Those are awful kinds of dreams. She is also good at seeing the future coming down the road to hit her. Tomlin seems like the kind of person who never forgets a wrong, real or imagined. I like your imagery with the black flies and Tomlin's alligator eyes.
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Those are awful kinds of dreams. She is also good at seeing the future coming down the road to hit her. Tomlin seems like the kind of person who never forgets a wrong, real or imagined. I like your imagery with the black flies and Tomlin's alligator eyes.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
That was some nasty dream. I think that man will attempt to get to Miranda through Waylon. He is that type. Sic Dougie on him. His male pride might click on. :-) Karen
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That was some nasty dream. I think that man will attempt to get to Miranda through Waylon. He is that type. Sic Dougie on him. His male pride might click on. :-) Karen
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
People like Mr Tomlin have a habit of getting under our skin. I often have a talk with my reflection, often to instil some confidence in myself. Another fine readable chapter Gretchen. You have a wonderful inventive way with words and these lines were my favourite:
(I swallow the peppery taste of sarcasm)
(Alligators smile in a similar fashion, flashing teeth and cold reptilian eyes).
Love Dolly x x x
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People like Mr Tomlin have a habit of getting under our skin. I often have a talk with my reflection, often to instil some confidence in myself. Another fine readable chapter Gretchen. You have a wonderful inventive way with words and these lines were my favourite:
(I swallow the peppery taste of sarcasm)
(Alligators smile in a similar fashion, flashing teeth and cold reptilian eyes).
Love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
Comment from Maria Millsaps
Hello, I found your writing interesting but lacking information. I would have liked to have heard more about Mr. Tomlin. What makes him so creepy, and how is he making trouble for Miranda or Waylon? From the storyline, I get that Mr. Tomlin is Waylon's school teacher. How is he a threat to Waylon? How old is Waylon? Inquiry minds want to know.
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Hello, I found your writing interesting but lacking information. I would have liked to have heard more about Mr. Tomlin. What makes him so creepy, and how is he making trouble for Miranda or Waylon? From the storyline, I get that Mr. Tomlin is Waylon's school teacher. How is he a threat to Waylon? How old is Waylon? Inquiry minds want to know.
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2024