The Pit Bull
My dog Kratos17 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Kratos sounds like a wonderful dog and it matters not which breed a dog is, it is all about how the owners look after the dog Cecilia. I loved your loving words here, it sounds like you have a lovely relationship together and he is a loyal friend. A passionate and endearing post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Kratos sounds like a wonderful dog and it matters not which breed a dog is, it is all about how the owners look after the dog Cecilia. I loved your loving words here, it sounds like you have a lovely relationship together and he is a loyal friend. A passionate and endearing post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Dolly,
Thank you for the great review. He is a great dog. All dogs are as good as their owners and the way they are treated.
Cecilia
Comment from nomi338
As people unfamiliar with any breed of dog react negatively to stories of a dog misbehaving. They almost always blame the dog, and rarely the owner who maybe did not train or treat the animal properly. When we read or hear about a person who does horrible things, do we berate the human race, or do we look into that person's life to try and find a possible reason for their misbehavior?
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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As people unfamiliar with any breed of dog react negatively to stories of a dog misbehaving. They almost always blame the dog, and rarely the owner who maybe did not train or treat the animal properly. When we read or hear about a person who does horrible things, do we berate the human race, or do we look into that person's life to try and find a possible reason for their misbehavior?
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Nomi,
I think people who treat animals horribly need to put down. Isn't that what the dogs have done if they bite someone?
People that mistreat these innocent creatures should never be allowed to own one. Especially the breed on the "Aggressive list. You should have to get some type of training prior to owning one. I don't care what someone is going through that shouldn't give them the right to abuse an innocent animal.
Cecilia
Comment from karenina
Smiling here's I was scratching my head, wondering why my previous review of this poem wasn't !here
My mistake... That was a previous poem you wrote about your fur-baby!
Kratos surely brings you joy and your muse is happy to inspire you to share his good natured, energy filled antics!
Your ABAB rhyme works very well here.
My son's family has a pit bull -- I totally understand "Zoomies!'
Karenina
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Smiling here's I was scratching my head, wondering why my previous review of this poem wasn't !here
My mistake... That was a previous poem you wrote about your fur-baby!
Kratos surely brings you joy and your muse is happy to inspire you to share his good natured, energy filled antics!
Your ABAB rhyme works very well here.
My son's family has a pit bull -- I totally understand "Zoomies!'
Karenina
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Karenina,
Thank you for the kind review. Kratos gets the zoomies so often inside he jumped on the couch one day and sent it flying into the wall. He left a huge whole. That's 100 lbs of lean, mean muscle.
Cecilia
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Karenina,
Thank you for the kind review. Kratos gets the zoomies so often inside he jumped on the couch one day and sent it flying into the wall. He left a huge whole. That's 100 lbs of lean, mean muscle.
Cecilia
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They think they're lap dogs, too -- at least Naomi does. She's a big baby with lots of strength and sometimes that's a frightening combination!
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Karenina,
It can be frightening for sure. Yes, Kratos was raised by the pugs, so he for sure thinks he's a lap baby.
Cecilia
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Hi Cecilia, You certainly love your Kratos and have written a fun, rhyming post as a tribute to him. I've heard that they can be complete babies despite the bad press they get. Personally, I would worry about their massive strength but, if properly trained by the owner, this should not present a problem. Well done! Debbie
I (laugh) so hard I cry
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Hi Cecilia, You certainly love your Kratos and have written a fun, rhyming post as a tribute to him. I've heard that they can be complete babies despite the bad press they get. Personally, I would worry about their massive strength but, if properly trained by the owner, this should not present a problem. Well done! Debbie
I (laugh) so hard I cry
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Debbie,
Thank you for the kind review. They are sweet dogs if trained properly. I though I fixed that typo. Thank you I'm on it.
Cecilia
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I love pit bulls and all dogs really but pit bulls are so misunderstood and given undeserved bad treatment. Your poem about your beloved fur baby is adorable. thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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I love pit bulls and all dogs really but pit bulls are so misunderstood and given undeserved bad treatment. Your poem about your beloved fur baby is adorable. thanks for sharing
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Marilyn,
Thank you for your kind review. Pitties are the best.
Cecilia
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, what a wonderful description of man's best friend... okay, in this case woman's (wink, wink) --- dog lovers can certainly relate to the emotion you've written into your offering today! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Oh, what a wonderful description of man's best friend... okay, in this case woman's (wink, wink) --- dog lovers can certainly relate to the emotion you've written into your offering today! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Y.M.,
Thank you for the kind review. Man's best friend is the best.
Cecilia
Comment from Nicki.B
Love this, I've a doggo too, I call him my only son lol! I've three daughters.
First just an observation
Stanza 1: typo 'laugh'
Stanza 3: did you mean 'so often' rather than 'to soften'
I could be wrong!..apologies if so.
One tip I got from a pro on here was to have the same count of syllables for each line for improved flow and meter, something to think about for your next rhyming poem!
He sounds like a lovely fellow, very energetic! Yes bad press in Ireland also there's been some deaths. It's terrible when they get tarred with one brush!
Well done it was a fun and enjoyable read!
Best Wishes
Nicki
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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Love this, I've a doggo too, I call him my only son lol! I've three daughters.
First just an observation
Stanza 1: typo 'laugh'
Stanza 3: did you mean 'so often' rather than 'to soften'
I could be wrong!..apologies if so.
One tip I got from a pro on here was to have the same count of syllables for each line for improved flow and meter, something to think about for your next rhyming poem!
He sounds like a lovely fellow, very energetic! Yes bad press in Ireland also there's been some deaths. It's terrible when they get tarred with one brush!
Well done it was a fun and enjoyable read!
Best Wishes
Nicki
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Hi Nicki,
Thank you for the review and the advice. I am still learning alll the rules. I'm a novice for sure. I will take your advice and change to so often it makes more sense. Thank you girlfriend. I appreciate it.
Cecilia
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You're very welcome! I remember when I got the syllables count and meter advice I went and updated all my rhymed poems lol! Saying that 'all' was only about 6 or 7 at the time! Happy writing xxx
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Thank you Nicki you're the best
Cecilia
