Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

I'm glad that you mention pain with the passion here, as often they play equal parts. The tangled knots of the emotions parallel the tangled knots of the rope.

That image is the icing on the cake.

Good luck in the contest.

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024

Thank you, Pam! I'm glad you liked my short poem. I don't write many of them because, well, you know ... I'm kinda long-winded. 😁

Comment from CM Pickard

Excellent

Great entry to this competition. There's tension in it with the pain and passion while 'tangled knots' give a vivid illustration of how deep feelings last.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024

Thank you for your comments! I'm glad you enjoyed! 😊

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

So very true, Patrick!
Love the analogy of love containing the force of "tangled knots" that "no force can pull apart."

Much enjoyed.
Thank you for sharing!
diane

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 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024

Thank you, Diane! 😊

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

oohhhhh I like that. Very good for someone who hates short poems lol 4 words per line, 5 syllables per line and it rhymes! Not sure it can get better than that. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024

Thank you, Marilyn! 😊