Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Miracles - Chap 8"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
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Comment from marilyn quillen
Now I'm all caught up so you can write some more, lol. is anyone else this big of a pain in your backside? what we need is a long iv line and you could just fee it to me that way, do you publish any of these?
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Now I'm all caught up so you can write some more, lol. is anyone else this big of a pain in your backside? what we need is a long iv line and you could just fee it to me that way, do you publish any of these?
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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I so appreciate all the time you take to read and enjoy my story, Marilyn. Under no circumstances do I consider you a pain in my backside. I am thankful for your time and thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
Ahh, another iron in the fire, Rebecca seems to have been adopted, and had a twin who has died, and she is the sole inheritor of a fairly valuable estate that has a mansion that has fallen into disrepair, meanwhile Matthew might have amnesia, well done Carol, blessings Roy
Typo : You (are) your grandfather. And?
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Ahh, another iron in the fire, Rebecca seems to have been adopted, and had a twin who has died, and she is the sole inheritor of a fairly valuable estate that has a mansion that has fallen into disrepair, meanwhile Matthew might have amnesia, well done Carol, blessings Roy
Typo : You (are) your grandfather. And?
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Carol, are you going to force me to take notes for my own mental clarity? lol Dang, that was a lot this time. and now, not only is Matthew missing but he suddently had develped amnesia? oh you love to torture us! but i'll be back next time. :-)
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Carol, are you going to force me to take notes for my own mental clarity? lol Dang, that was a lot this time. and now, not only is Matthew missing but he suddently had develped amnesia? oh you love to torture us! but i'll be back next time. :-)
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Forgive my cut and paste... I promise to do better!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a lot to take in! Poor Rebecca! I wonder what the house is like.
Now Eleanor knows Matthew is missing, she's very worried about him. I wonder how they will find him. There is so much happening now. I'm glad I can get to read on tomorrow! Another wonderful chapter, my friend. I'm off to bed now. Love and hugs. Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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What a lot to take in! Poor Rebecca! I wonder what the house is like.
Now Eleanor knows Matthew is missing, she's very worried about him. I wonder how they will find him. There is so much happening now. I'm glad I can get to read on tomorrow! Another wonderful chapter, my friend. I'm off to bed now. Love and hugs. Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Sorry I am a little behind with the thank yous but always know that I appreciate you and love you for every moment you give to my work. You are the best! And I love you for getting me through all this and there aren't words of thanks enough.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
I assume Matthew might be the one the new ghost is trying to nurse back to life since he had a badge and he is missing. Rebecca is having to come with some interesting news in her life. I always enjoy your stories although I have to read them quickly because they are long and I'm so far behine with review and have little time to write.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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I assume Matthew might be the one the new ghost is trying to nurse back to life since he had a badge and he is missing. Rebecca is having to come with some interesting news in her life. I always enjoy your stories although I have to read them quickly because they are long and I'm so far behine with review and have little time to write.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Forgive my cut and paste... I promise to do better!
Comment from patcelaw
Just as it is with all of your writing, this is a very well written chapter for your book and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best way you throw all of your book and I also wish you a very pleasant weekend. Patricia.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Just as it is with all of your writing, this is a very well written chapter for your book and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best way you throw all of your book and I also wish you a very pleasant weekend. Patricia.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Forgive my cut and paste... I promise to do better!
Comment from LJbutterfly
Now, you've introduced a new path to follow. Rebecca, like Jenna, was adopted, but Rebecca has a twin sister. How will this tie into the paths we are currently following...like Jenna's pregnancy, Matthew injured and not remembering who he is, William roaming around doing Doyle's bidding, and Margaret's unsolved murder? This is why I enjoy your novels. There is lots to chew on.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Now, you've introduced a new path to follow. Rebecca, like Jenna, was adopted, but Rebecca has a twin sister. How will this tie into the paths we are currently following...like Jenna's pregnancy, Matthew injured and not remembering who he is, William roaming around doing Doyle's bidding, and Margaret's unsolved murder? This is why I enjoy your novels. There is lots to chew on.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Forgive my cut and paste... I promise to do better!
Comment from Jacob1395
I am really glad that Eleanor is there for Jenna at this time. That was a really heartfelt conversation between them at the beginning, this is going to be a very difficult road for Jenna. I enjoyed reading it, Carol. I can't wait to read the next one.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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I am really glad that Eleanor is there for Jenna at this time. That was a really heartfelt conversation between them at the beginning, this is going to be a very difficult road for Jenna. I enjoyed reading it, Carol. I can't wait to read the next one.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Forgive my cut and paste... I promise to do better!
Comment from Tim Margetts
Twisting and turning faster than a Wurlitzer at the fairground. I am loving all the convolutions. You must have a massive spreadsheet to keep track of it all
Really enjoying this.
Tim x
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Twisting and turning faster than a Wurlitzer at the fairground. I am loving all the convolutions. You must have a massive spreadsheet to keep track of it all
Really enjoying this.
Tim x
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Forgive my cut and paste... I promise to do better!
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We all get circumstances :)
They are an allowed factor in life.
Sending hugs and a touch of anticipation.
Tim x
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
As usual you have many cool twists and turns in this story. Rebecca's story is certainly amazing. There is one spag in it on a very interesting sentence. Somehow, I feared the halfdead man was Matthew. And ghosts can apologize? Danni's name is misspelled in one or two places. Does your computer replace the spelling you chose?
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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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As usual you have many cool twists and turns in this story. Rebecca's story is certainly amazing. There is one spag in it on a very interesting sentence. Somehow, I feared the halfdead man was Matthew. And ghosts can apologize? Danni's name is misspelled in one or two places. Does your computer replace the spelling you chose?
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Forgive my cut and paste... I promise to do better!