Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

I do hope there is light and love in the future for our children, grandchildren. You've used your twenty syllables well to bring a bit of that light and hope into my day, and I thank you. A lovely presentation Brenda,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024

I'm glad I brought some hope. Thank you for you review.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Don't you just love those candles on the dark waters, they give a soft glow to life as one gazes at them, I love this twenty syllable poem and entry into this contest, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024

Thank you Roy, for your great review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Such pleasant scenes help us to see the positive in life and I enjoyed the light of happiness in this post Brenda, magical words for the contest, love Dolly x x x

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 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024

Thank you Dolly for your very nice review. We need something positive.