Miracles
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Comment from Esther Brown
Excellent chapter, wouldn't change a thing. Of course she is pregnant. Now what? Being pregnant when you are in a bad place is a story that can have so many endings. I will keep reading...Esther
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Excellent chapter, wouldn't change a thing. Of course she is pregnant. Now what? Being pregnant when you are in a bad place is a story that can have so many endings. I will keep reading...Esther
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Hello, Esther... So much is about to unfold...like an avalanche on top of everyone. Hope you enjoy the story as we proceed.
Smiles, Carol
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Can't wait.
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Chapter 6 is posted and 7 is in the wings waiting. LOL
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Why to finish a chapter, to let me hang on, is she or she is not. Wow, a new story curious to see how this will flow. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Why to finish a chapter, to let me hang on, is she or she is not. Wow, a new story curious to see how this will flow. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Hello, Iza... You are so kind. I am glad you enjoyed this chapter, The story is filled with many twists and turns as we go. I hope you continue to follow and enjoy.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
I think I have that funny feeling that she's quite obviously pregnant, but surely her period could be absent also. But then some keep having them anyway, beautifully written, my friend Carol, your episodes are consistently good, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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I think I have that funny feeling that she's quite obviously pregnant, but surely her period could be absent also. But then some keep having them anyway, beautifully written, my friend Carol, your episodes are consistently good, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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I think she chalked it up to the stress of the rape...either that or she just blanked it out so she didn't have to think about it. Either way it has and will make a deep impression o her life. Thanks for the review and comments.
Smiles, Carol
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This could find Matthew out.
Comment from LJbutterfly
I had hoped Jenna had a stomach virus or the flu. But now we know she might be pregnant as a result of a rape. Or is it? Will she have to decide how to handle being pregnant by a rapist, or will she need a DNA test? This is deep.
I'm glad you included a slight recap of what happened in the past with Eleanor as a wealthy artist and Jenna not realizing Eleanor was her mother. This helps new readers understand the history.
You are off to a riveting start.
Check out your seventh paragraph.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I had hoped Jenna had a stomach virus or the flu. But now we know she might be pregnant as a result of a rape. Or is it? Will she have to decide how to handle being pregnant by a rapist, or will she need a DNA test? This is deep.
I'm glad you included a slight recap of what happened in the past with Eleanor as a wealthy artist and Jenna not realizing Eleanor was her mother. This helps new readers understand the history.
You are off to a riveting start.
Check out your seventh paragraph.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I thought others might not have read the other books so a little backup wouldn't hurt. Nice that you noticed. Glad you are enjoying the book...your thoughts mean a lot to me.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from marilyn quillen
you just had to stop it right there huh? you know it is a good thing you only give this to me in small pieces because I wouldn't get anything else done, great terrific job
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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you just had to stop it right there huh? you know it is a good thing you only give this to me in small pieces because I wouldn't get anything else done, great terrific job
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Good day, Marilyn.... Glad to see you are chomping at the bit for another chapter or two.... the drama is building! Can't wait to hear what you thought.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I'm sure you've been told this, but you have gremlins in the paragraph that begins "As CJ, you were rich and famous . . ."
I understand that Matthew's last name is Donatelli, but when you use them interchangeably, it becomes confusing to the reader.
Well, you really left us hanging this time, Carol, but I have a pretty good idea of what it will tell her.
I really enjoy your dialogue and the pace at which the story moves. Looking forward to the next chapter.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I'm sure you've been told this, but you have gremlins in the paragraph that begins "As CJ, you were rich and famous . . ."
I understand that Matthew's last name is Donatelli, but when you use them interchangeably, it becomes confusing to the reader.
Well, you really left us hanging this time, Carol, but I have a pretty good idea of what it will tell her.
I really enjoy your dialogue and the pace at which the story moves. Looking forward to the next chapter.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thanks for letting me know that the "bugs" got into my writing.... I thought it wasn't that sweet. LOL But I've got out the "eliminator" had it's taken care of...thanks! Glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I hope Eleanor investigates the painting she saw. After all, doors can't keep her out. Donatelli was a nasty as he could get. Why doesn't he want to talk to Jenna? She needs a friend if he can be nothing more to her. Why didn't she report the rape?
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I hope Eleanor investigates the painting she saw. After all, doors can't keep her out. Donatelli was a nasty as he could get. Why doesn't he want to talk to Jenna? She needs a friend if he can be nothing more to her. Why didn't she report the rape?
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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You know, Donatelli...jumping to conclusions and getting all out of shape. This time he might have jumped too far! Troubles on the horizon.
Smiles, Carol
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I am surprised he hasn't shot himself in the foot by now.
Comment from Jacob1395
What a cliffhanger to leave your chapter on, Carol. I really felt for Jeanna and I know the pain it will cause for her if the result does turn out to be positive. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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What a cliffhanger to leave your chapter on, Carol. I really felt for Jeanna and I know the pain it will cause for her if the result does turn out to be positive. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much, Jacob! Can't wait till I hear what you think of the next chapter. The drama is building. Thanks for enjoyng the story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, Jenna is pregnant. From the rape, but it sounds as if she spent a night with Matthew. I am curious where and how you're going to handle this. This is a good write, and I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Yes, Jenna is pregnant. From the rape, but it sounds as if she spent a night with Matthew. I am curious where and how you're going to handle this. This is a good write, and I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Matthew won't handle the situation well at all...he always jumps before he knows where he is landing. Hopefully, he hasn't jumped too far this time.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Oh no. I was afraid that was where Jenna's nausea was headed! I hope that's not the case but it doesn't look good. Great chapter, Carol. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Oh no. I was afraid that was where Jenna's nausea was headed! I hope that's not the case but it doesn't look good. Great chapter, Carol. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Hello, Marilyn...Thanks for reading another chapter...We are about to really take a leap into the fire and drama now.... Hang on!
Smiles, Carol