God's Children
A poem36 total reviews
Comment from Jacob1395
This is an important piece to remind us that God is always there for us, and even though there are times when we may feel as though we are on our own, God is always there. Another excellent, spiritual piece, Roy. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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This is an important piece to remind us that God is always there for us, and even though there are times when we may feel as though we are on our own, God is always there. Another excellent, spiritual piece, Roy. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks Jacob, for these most encouraging comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Hi Roy, this is a beautiful poem. I like how you tell he is always with us day and night. He is our friend. Also the words: he desires my friendship is so endearing. Well written. Great jo
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Hi Roy, this is a beautiful poem. I like how you tell he is always with us day and night. He is our friend. Also the words: he desires my friendship is so endearing. Well written. Great jo
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks Brenda, for these most encouraging comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
"He's never ever failed menu" - not sure what this means. I know what an American menu is, but that doesn't seem to fit here.
There's a saying, "One cannot be all things to all people", yet you talk of One who can: my savior, hero, brother, Lord, friend . . .
A true declaration of your love for God. Thanks for sharing.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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"He's never ever failed menu" - not sure what this means. I know what an American menu is, but that doesn't seem to fit here.
There's a saying, "One cannot be all things to all people", yet you talk of One who can: my savior, hero, brother, Lord, friend . . .
A true declaration of your love for God. Thanks for sharing.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks Pam, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Senyai
Hi Roy,
This brought me to my knees. So lovely and comforting that I can wrap myself in your words because they are from God the Father and Jesus Christ. We are His children and that feels so right. His love is all around us all the time. We are hungry and He feeds us, we are lonely and He comforts us, we are lost and he finds us.
Beautiful poem, Roy, as is your quotes from the KJV after the poem. Thanks for sharing daily with us.
Senyai
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Hi Roy,
This brought me to my knees. So lovely and comforting that I can wrap myself in your words because they are from God the Father and Jesus Christ. We are His children and that feels so right. His love is all around us all the time. We are hungry and He feeds us, we are lonely and He comforts us, we are lost and he finds us.
Beautiful poem, Roy, as is your quotes from the KJV after the poem. Thanks for sharing daily with us.
Senyai
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You are so welcome, Roy.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao,
Yes God loves his children and he is there for us 24/7.
He sent His Son who died for us so we could hope to earn eternal life.
Our celestial Father must be very sad to see His children kill in his name.
God must be sad to see women turn their wombs into tombs.
God must be sad to see us trash exploit our home world , His gift to us.
God was right without his guidance we are lost.
I feel His presence when I take a walk in my pine forest and I speak to Him.
I know I'm not alone.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Ciao,
Yes God loves his children and he is there for us 24/7.
He sent His Son who died for us so we could hope to earn eternal life.
Our celestial Father must be very sad to see His children kill in his name.
God must be sad to see women turn their wombs into tombs.
God must be sad to see us trash exploit our home world , His gift to us.
God was right without his guidance we are lost.
I feel His presence when I take a walk in my pine forest and I speak to Him.
I know I'm not alone.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
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My pleasure! 😐
Keep safe🍀
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You too
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme.Also has a great overall presentation. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme.Also has a great overall presentation. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks Joanne, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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Your welcome
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, we may not need a talent to be great or special in the eye of God, but there is a talent (in your thought and words) that brings hope and joy to those who read it, so very well written with a wonderful message****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Excellent, we may not need a talent to be great or special in the eye of God, but there is a talent (in your thought and words) that brings hope and joy to those who read it, so very well written with a wonderful message****kahpot
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks Kim, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from LateBloomer
Roy, your poem is beautifully penned--sincere and soulful. Of note:
My Saviour and my hero
my brother, Lord and friend,.
Always walking by my side
His friendship cannot end.
(The above lines brought a tear to my eye. Good sensory appeal.)
Silky rhyming. Well done. Exceptional writing. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Roy, your poem is beautifully penned--sincere and soulful. Of note:
My Saviour and my hero
my brother, Lord and friend,.
Always walking by my side
His friendship cannot end.
(The above lines brought a tear to my eye. Good sensory appeal.)
Silky rhyming. Well done. Exceptional writing. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks Margaret, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Carol Clark2
Good poem of God's presence in your life, Roy. Yes, Jesus is a brother who stays with us always, no matter the circumstances, and He loves us. Good reminder that we are His heirs. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Good poem of God's presence in your life, Roy. Yes, Jesus is a brother who stays with us always, no matter the circumstances, and He loves us. Good reminder that we are His heirs. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks Carol, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Samantha Wymer
We are all children of God just like your beautiful poem states. A good Sheppard that watches over his flock. You have a gift Roy that gods blessed you with. The way you right poems in a way we can understand. Never lose that. God bless you.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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We are all children of God just like your beautiful poem states. A good Sheppard that watches over his flock. You have a gift Roy that gods blessed you with. The way you right poems in a way we can understand. Never lose that. God bless you.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks Sam, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy