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Comment from Jacob1395
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I think we always remember the teachers who encourage us. I would love to meet a few of my old teachers again, they were really instrumental in my writing as well. An excellent piece, I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. 😊

    gypsy
Comment from royowen
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We all need someone like mrs. Whipple, when I was only in my early twenties, my best friend's dad was my opening batting partner at cricket, but he taught me to think, play bridge, and how to conduct family like, he was a mentor, and really the father I never had, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. 😊

    gypsy
reply by royowen on 22-Oct-2024
    Welcome
Comment from DonandVicki
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I wish I had taken a writing class back then. I hated english but loved writing stories, go figure. I had a number of teachers and proffesors that have helped me along. But FanStory has helped me with the writing. Loved your story Gypsy.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. 😊

    gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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I loved learning about your Creative Writing teacher! Thanks for sharing how she knew you had a gift in writing and also bolstered your confidence. In the same way, then you encouraged your own students!

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    That's true, I didn't think about it in that way.

    You are an exceptional teacher too. You teach us so many things and your esl students are very lucky to have you.

    Love,

    Marival ❤️
reply by lyenochka on 21-Oct-2024
    You know how it goes. We're equally blessed by our students!
Comment from shelley kaye
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was she related to mr whipple who told everyone not to squeeze the charmin? lol!

a great story - sounds like an awesome teacher - lucky to get one of those!

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)



 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from ESOSTINE
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A great tribute to Mrs Whipple whose guidance and influenced shaped your writing and speaking skills. Well penned, dear. I am sure she will be glad to read this even in her spirit being. Warmest regards

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 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from RodG
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This is a lovely tribute to Mrs. Whipple who encouraged you to write and built your self-esteem. Isn't it amazing what some people recognized in you when you were young? Rod

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 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊


    Gypsy