Creation's curse
A poem16 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Your poem today seems full of grace for what God has created and for how we should appreciate what we have been given, share, and help others find peace. Have a great day, Roy!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Your poem today seems full of grace for what God has created and for how we should appreciate what we have been given, share, and help others find peace. Have a great day, Roy!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thanks Carol, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Preaching to the choir mister, So many folks walking around blind to what is right in front of them. There is an easy phrase, that is not used nearly enough: "How can I help?" Enjoy your weekend.
Karen
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Preaching to the choir mister, So many folks walking around blind to what is right in front of them. There is an easy phrase, that is not used nearly enough: "How can I help?" Enjoy your weekend.
Karen
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thanks Karen, for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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Comment from Richard Frohm
If there was a score over six, I would give it to you on this poem.
That had such meaning and beautiful at the same time. You sir, can write.
I have always said anyone can write stories, but it takes an exceptional person to write poetry . Especially poetry at your level.
My Grandfather and mother had the gift of poetry. What they wrote was beautiful
I try on occasion to write poems. Like the the one you just reviewed.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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If there was a score over six, I would give it to you on this poem.
That had such meaning and beautiful at the same time. You sir, can write.
I have always said anyone can write stories, but it takes an exceptional person to write poetry . Especially poetry at your level.
My Grandfather and mother had the gift of poetry. What they wrote was beautiful
I try on occasion to write poems. Like the the one you just reviewed.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thanks Richard, for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Teri7
Roy, This is a very well written poem. You used great descriptive words and very good scriptures. very beautiful imagery from the artwork you chose. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Roy, This is a very well written poem. You used great descriptive words and very good scriptures. very beautiful imagery from the artwork you chose. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thanks Teri, for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful poem. It's always a joy to see the hand of God in creation and He is also evident in the setting up and bringing down of rulers and others. Sometimes we don't understand His ways, but they are nevertheless perfect.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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A beautiful poem. It's always a joy to see the hand of God in creation and He is also evident in the setting up and bringing down of rulers and others. Sometimes we don't understand His ways, but they are nevertheless perfect.
Wendy
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thanks Wendy for these most encouraging comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a beautifully written poem! I love the line about the trees clapping their hands! I thought with that line you brought nature to life. Your closing lines are so touching. This entire piece is so touching. I love how you show a appreciation for the beauty around us - wonderful work!
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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What a beautifully written poem! I love the line about the trees clapping their hands! I thought with that line you brought nature to life. Your closing lines are so touching. This entire piece is so touching. I love how you show a appreciation for the beauty around us - wonderful work!
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thanks Michael, for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy