Pumpkin Logic
a 20-syllable poem15 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Bill,
I love the symbolism in this poem!
It could be any endeavor in life that has soured, a failed relationship, etc., or a despot vanquished.
Great poem in 20 syllables,
Bill,
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Bill,
I love the symbolism in this poem!
It could be any endeavor in life that has soured, a failed relationship, etc., or a despot vanquished.
Great poem in 20 syllables,
Bill,
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Cindy
Comment from judiverse
Just like a woman after she takes off her makeup. I would never bother with a real pumpkin. I'm only interested in the canned variety that you can turn into dessert goodies. What's to become of those pumpkins discarded after Halloween? Gruesome looking picture. Someone should start an association for protecting pumpkins. judi
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Just like a woman after she takes off her makeup. I would never bother with a real pumpkin. I'm only interested in the canned variety that you can turn into dessert goodies. What's to become of those pumpkins discarded after Halloween? Gruesome looking picture. Someone should start an association for protecting pumpkins. judi
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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I think they call it the garbage can.
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Unless you have a really large pumpkin. judi
Comment from patcelaw
The Carve pumpkinsare fun to see when they are fresh but when they start to wrap, it is very ugly site. Here in the orange on the black does not show up very well for people with vision problems. You might try a yellow rather than the orange. Patricia.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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The Carve pumpkinsare fun to see when they are fresh but when they start to wrap, it is very ugly site. Here in the orange on the black does not show up very well for people with vision problems. You might try a yellow rather than the orange. Patricia.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Okay, Patricia.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear this pumpkin is in a sorry state of collapse, perhaps a gin and tonic might revive it? A fun post Bill and you made me smile, love Dolly x x x x x
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Oh dear this pumpkin is in a sorry state of collapse, perhaps a gin and tonic might revive it? A fun post Bill and you made me smile, love Dolly x x x x x
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the Haiku 20 Syllable Poem contest. It's a timelt topic with Halloween coming soon.
Excellent presentation and word imagery.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
It had seemed so a/live on Ha/llo/ween;
lights danced in its eyes
and now rott/ing mouth.
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Wonderful entry for the Haiku 20 Syllable Poem contest. It's a timelt topic with Halloween coming soon.
Excellent presentation and word imagery.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
It had seemed so a/live on Ha/llo/ween;
lights danced in its eyes
and now rott/ing mouth.
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Gypsy