Willing Hearts
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Comment from Sanku
Sarah is right .Noah should start telling Sami how important she is to him I amso glad and relieved that Chen is behind bars and I hpoe Myra becomes well soon ...
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Sarah is right .Noah should start telling Sami how important she is to him I amso glad and relieved that Chen is behind bars and I hpoe Myra becomes well soon ...
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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More about Myra will be coming. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
This has been another great chapter. I realize we might be heading towards the end, real soon. You have done well in keeping us on board and totally captured in your story. No spags.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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This has been another great chapter. I realize we might be heading towards the end, real soon. You have done well in keeping us on board and totally captured in your story. No spags.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. The is about the first week in February.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Barbara,
it's good to see that things are winding down. From a professional point of view, Noah should be read the riot act. He violated protocol. While he can't help whom he might fall in love with, his first and foremost objective was to keep Sami safe, and getting involved with her could have actually jeopardized her. That being said, it will be interesting to see how this ends. If they should actually marry, I would think that Sami would have to develop a strong sense of trust in Noah, as being in law enforcement can put a real strain on a marriage. Of course so can being the spouse of a military member, as you well know. Thanks for sharing this gal.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Hello Barbara,
it's good to see that things are winding down. From a professional point of view, Noah should be read the riot act. He violated protocol. While he can't help whom he might fall in love with, his first and foremost objective was to keep Sami safe, and getting involved with her could have actually jeopardized her. That being said, it will be interesting to see how this ends. If they should actually marry, I would think that Sami would have to develop a strong sense of trust in Noah, as being in law enforcement can put a real strain on a marriage. Of course so can being the spouse of a military member, as you well know. Thanks for sharing this gal.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Noah has a plan. We'll figure it out much later.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Good story. You are almost done. It's been good reading. I am tired from writing all my Theodore stories, I can't begin to think about how tired an entire novel can make you. How the trials with the publighing going? Karen
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Good story. You are almost done. It's been good reading. I am tired from writing all my Theodore stories, I can't begin to think about how tired an entire novel can make you. How the trials with the publighing going? Karen
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Comment from lyenochka
The lovebirds are really out in the open now so they better learn how to express their love more accurately! Great chapter. I think the one that's really incorrigible is Mateo. He can't take a BIG hint even after Sami spells it out for him multiple times! She's smart. He'd probably be wondering with other women as soon as he won his unconquerable love quest.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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The lovebirds are really out in the open now so they better learn how to express their love more accurately! Great chapter. I think the one that's really incorrigible is Mateo. He can't take a BIG hint even after Sami spells it out for him multiple times! She's smart. He'd probably be wondering with other women as soon as he won his unconquerable love quest.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Sami knows what she's doing. LOL
Comment from patcelaw
This is extremely well written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your sentence structure and your paragraph are excellent. Also, your punctuation is very good. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I especially wish you a very good week. Patricia.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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This is extremely well written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your sentence structure and your paragraph are excellent. Also, your punctuation is very good. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I especially wish you a very good week. Patricia.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from Douglas Goff
This was a fun chapter. I enjoy the back and forth banter between agents. You caught the brotherhood element that most civilians don't quite comprehend. Nice work!
This seemed oddly worded, but maybe it's me? ::
Sami backed up to almost her bedroom and stared towards the door.
Good stuff, my friend!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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This was a fun chapter. I enjoy the back and forth banter between agents. You caught the brotherhood element that most civilians don't quite comprehend. Nice work!
This seemed oddly worded, but maybe it's me? ::
Sami backed up to almost her bedroom and stared towards the door.
Good stuff, my friend!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I'll recheck that sentence.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Mateo certainly doesn't give up, but it is a hopeless cause. Sami loves Noah and that will never change. If Noah takes a nice safe leadership role in his profession and works in an office, Sami will have her dreams come true. Noah may find it hard to fulfill her dream.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Mateo certainly doesn't give up, but it is a hopeless cause. Sami loves Noah and that will never change. If Noah takes a nice safe leadership role in his profession and works in an office, Sami will have her dreams come true. Noah may find it hard to fulfill her dream.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Noah has a plan. It'll be reveled much later.
Comment from nomi338
Awesome story development. I love the way you are wrapping the story. I have no problem or argument with the development of things within the story concept. The end are wrapped up tightly, The characters continue to behave in patterns already developed earlier in the story, no unexplained behavior. Everything is wrapped up tightly. Congratulations. Job well done.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Awesome story development. I love the way you are wrapping the story. I have no problem or argument with the development of things within the story concept. The end are wrapped up tightly, The characters continue to behave in patterns already developed earlier in the story, no unexplained behavior. Everything is wrapped up tightly. Congratulations. Job well done.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Perfect last line, Barbara. What's with some men, maybe most of them? Does it hurt so much to let women know how important we are to them?
Still one shop left to find, but, wow, didn't they save a lot of girls??? So exciting to get that resolved. I think I missed a chapter, though. I'm going back to check.
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Perfect last line, Barbara. What's with some men, maybe most of them? Does it hurt so much to let women know how important we are to them?
Still one shop left to find, but, wow, didn't they save a lot of girls??? So exciting to get that resolved. I think I missed a chapter, though. I'm going back to check.
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.