Spirited Justice
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh good, Eleanor is in the right place. Matthew will save Sophia and Hilda, while Eleanor takes care of the enforcer, Bryce, and Henry. Then all they need to do, is put Henry and Bryce in windowless room, handcuffed to a chair and let Max in! I can't wait for the next part! Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Oh good, Eleanor is in the right place. Matthew will save Sophia and Hilda, while Eleanor takes care of the enforcer, Bryce, and Henry. Then all they need to do, is put Henry and Bryce in windowless room, handcuffed to a chair and let Max in! I can't wait for the next part! Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Hello, Sandra! Thanks again for reading another chapter and enjoying it. Yes, Max would like payback wouldn't he? I hope you enjoy the next chapter. We are close to wrapping this story up.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
Woah, that scene was really intense, Carol, I could feel the fear Hilda and Sophie were experiencing, I couldn't believe the lengths Henry and Bryce were going through just to get the papers. Now I'm really hoping nothing is going to happen to them, you really have me hooked. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Woah, that scene was really intense, Carol, I could feel the fear Hilda and Sophie were experiencing, I couldn't believe the lengths Henry and Bryce were going through just to get the papers. Now I'm really hoping nothing is going to happen to them, you really have me hooked. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thak you, Jacob! I guarantee you that Eleanor is no pushover especially when it comes to her daughter. Sparks are going to fly! Thank you so much for the kindness and the stars. I am thrilled beyond words.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh Carol, I have chills all over me. This chapter was action from start to finish!! How exciting!! You have a lot going on from start, with Bryce and Henry arguing, to Jenna rushing off with the papers, then the last scene where Jenna has been kidnapped and the girls set on fire in the warehouse...what a cliff-hanger!!!
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Oh Carol, I have chills all over me. This chapter was action from start to finish!! How exciting!! You have a lot going on from start, with Bryce and Henry arguing, to Jenna rushing off with the papers, then the last scene where Jenna has been kidnapped and the girls set on fire in the warehouse...what a cliff-hanger!!!
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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I'm grinning from ear to ear, Rhonda. I hoped that this chapter would send a few chills down everyone's spine. The next one will even be wilder. Eleanor's not going to let the Enforcer harm her daughter if she has anything to say about it.... Sparks are going to fly! Thank you so much for the kind review and the stars. Awesome!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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I do love me some sparks!!!! Especially of the supernatural type, hehe.
I can't wait until the next chapter!!!
Comment from Me and Erin G
Excellent work. I was hooked almost immediately even tho I had not read any earlier chapters. If there were any....this could be a great opening chapter itself!
And what's with Eleanor? Materializing....temps dropping when she arrives! And how does Max fit in again? I need to know!
Now I need to "become a fan" so I'm certain to get the next chapter!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Excellent work. I was hooked almost immediately even tho I had not read any earlier chapters. If there were any....this could be a great opening chapter itself!
And what's with Eleanor? Materializing....temps dropping when she arrives! And how does Max fit in again? I need to know!
Now I need to "become a fan" so I'm certain to get the next chapter!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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What a blessing you are! Thank you so much for enjoying this chapter...though it's regrettable you've missed a lot. Eleanor is a ghost... and Danni, too! They work as detectives with the real thing. this is the second of a series and it's about to wind up.... but the next chapter will be a doozy. Thanks for the review and the awesome stars! A great way to start my Sunday morning.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is quite the ride - no pun intended. I could feel the tension! The dialogue is gripping and the suspense builds up easily holding my interest. The writing is solid. And three lines are terrifying. What a setup for the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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This is quite the ride - no pun intended. I could feel the tension! The dialogue is gripping and the suspense builds up easily holding my interest. The writing is solid. And three lines are terrifying. What a setup for the next chapter.
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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And I guarantee you, Michael, it will be quite the ride.... Eleanor doesn't like when you fool around with her daughter. Sparks are going to fly! Thanks for the review and kind words as always.
Smiles, Carol