Truckin
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Truckin, Ch 4"The left lane is for passing only
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This chapter is gripping! I was pulled in by Clyde's growing paranoia. I love the "Billy the Kid" approach! I like the little touches like his interaction with his daughter. That really makes him feel real. And exciting chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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This chapter is gripping! I was pulled in by Clyde's growing paranoia. I love the "Billy the Kid" approach! I like the little touches like his interaction with his daughter. That really makes him feel real. And exciting chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you very, very much! I was a bit concerned that this segment lacked enough excitement.