What Did I Come in Here For
Just for fun ~ Mostly Fiction51 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
This is wonderful and so relatable! I wonder if it's technology and this fast paced world always distracting us from our thoughts? You are so right about writing being good for the brain!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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This is wonderful and so relatable! I wonder if it's technology and this fast paced world always distracting us from our thoughts? You are so right about writing being good for the brain!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Hi Sharon, you are so sweet and I appreciate so very much your kind review, comments and lovely stars. I thank you with all my heart, my dear friend. Love and hugs, Debi
Comment from Harry Craft
Debi, did you write this for me? Lol! Some times I do the same exact thing. I am going into a room to get something and then I remember that I do not remember what I came in the room for - it seems kind of strange when that happens more and more. I can truly relate to this poem. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Debi, did you write this for me? Lol! Some times I do the same exact thing. I am going into a room to get something and then I remember that I do not remember what I came in the room for - it seems kind of strange when that happens more and more. I can truly relate to this poem. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Dear Harry, Hahaha, I was just trying to be funny with this, as I remember already twenty years ago going into another room and forgetting what I went in there for. Yes, it was fun writing something we could all relate to. And I do think that most of us are pretty happy with most of our friendships here too. Thank you so much for being one of mine.
Love and hugs, Debi
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Yes ma'am. I do believe you are so right!
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Harry, you mentioned you might be interested in a birthday poem. Do you mind me asking when is your birthday?
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Lol! Well, mine is July 27th.
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Shoot, but you are on for next year and I will contact you before then. If that is ok?
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That is just fine!
Comment from Laurie Holding
You get my first six this week. This is so universal, Debi. I feel like my dog looks when he gets into the middle of a room and just stands there. Well done, and I like your format and your font on this one--easy to read!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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You get my first six this week. This is so universal, Debi. I feel like my dog looks when he gets into the middle of a room and just stands there. Well done, and I like your format and your font on this one--easy to read!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Hi Laurie, you are so sweet and I appreciate so very much your kind review, comments and lovely stars. I thank you with all my heart, my dear friend. Love and hugs, Debi
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Debi,
I at 67, I share your brain fog. Have you ever put your cell phone in a refrigerator? I did once. I retrieved it before it exploded!
I have a small apartment, yet I misplace things sometimes
What a wonderful poem celebrating an aging, but wiser brain!
Best wishes,
Debi.
Cindy
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Debi,
I at 67, I share your brain fog. Have you ever put your cell phone in a refrigerator? I did once. I retrieved it before it exploded!
I have a small apartment, yet I misplace things sometimes
What a wonderful poem celebrating an aging, but wiser brain!
Best wishes,
Debi.
Cindy
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Hi Cindy, you are so sweet and I appreciate so very much your kind review and comments.
I thank you with all my heart, my dear friend. Love and hugs, Debi
Comment from bob cullen
I knew you weren't losing your mind, most of us believe that happened many years ago. The best thing about your poetry is the feeling of fun your work brings to us readers. Poetry can and should be entertaining and your postings provide that. For that I thank you.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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I knew you weren't losing your mind, most of us believe that happened many years ago. The best thing about your poetry is the feeling of fun your work brings to us readers. Poetry can and should be entertaining and your postings provide that. For that I thank you.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Hey Bob, you are so sweet and I appreciate so very much your kind review and comments.I thank you with all my heart, my dear friend. Love and hugs, Debi
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh Debi,
This is the cutest poem ever. I love the way it is written, with the repeated theme of What did I come in here for? I love it. It sounds like me on a good day. I just spent an hour looking for a hammer, just to find it sitting on the arm of the couch. I even had Kylie looking for it with me, lol.
This is a poem I'm sure just about everyone on here can relate to. It's honest, well written and leans towards something at least I struggle with. You made it funny, which is a good way to look at the subject. If you can't learn to laugh at yourself, you just get bitter.
Thanks so much for the smile,
Big hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Oh Debi,
This is the cutest poem ever. I love the way it is written, with the repeated theme of What did I come in here for? I love it. It sounds like me on a good day. I just spent an hour looking for a hammer, just to find it sitting on the arm of the couch. I even had Kylie looking for it with me, lol.
This is a poem I'm sure just about everyone on here can relate to. It's honest, well written and leans towards something at least I struggle with. You made it funny, which is a good way to look at the subject. If you can't learn to laugh at yourself, you just get bitter.
Thanks so much for the smile,
Big hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Hi Rhonda, you are so sweet and I appreciate so very much your kind review and comments. I am glad you liked my silly poem.
I thank you with all my heart, my dear friend. Love and hugs, Debi
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Thank you so much for your six stars too, sweetie.
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Love and hugs back to you, dear lady. I really enjoyed it and your sense of humor, yet love at the same time.
Comment from Janet Foor
I can relate. This happens more and more every day. At our house, we call it the "But First" syndrome. On my way to the kitchen, I am distracted several times so that by the time I get to the kitchen, I have no idea why I am there.
This would really be funny if it wasn't soooo true.
Blessings my friend
Janet
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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I can relate. This happens more and more every day. At our house, we call it the "But First" syndrome. On my way to the kitchen, I am distracted several times so that by the time I get to the kitchen, I have no idea why I am there.
This would really be funny if it wasn't soooo true.
Blessings my friend
Janet
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Hi Janet, you are so sweet and I appreciate so very much your kind review and comments. I am so glad you liked this silly poem.
I thank you with all my heart, my dear friend. Love and hugs, Debi
Comment from Esther Brown
I loved that line "I worry what I might forget". Writing is good for our brains. Just knowing someone cares enough to read what we write is a gift. Just think, if we get ALZ everything is new every day! Just kidding. You are loved. Esther
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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I loved that line "I worry what I might forget". Writing is good for our brains. Just knowing someone cares enough to read what we write is a gift. Just think, if we get ALZ everything is new every day! Just kidding. You are loved. Esther
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Hey sweetie, I am so sorry this is so late. I have just been swamped lately.
you are so sweet and I appreciate so very much your kind review and comments.
I thank you with all my heart, my dear friend. Love and hugs, Debi
Comment from Carol Clark2
I'm glad it's only 75% fiction for you. I had the very same experience this morning, and that isn't funny or fiction. Cute poem. I like the repeated line throughout, and the great rhymes. Yes, writing helps our brain cells. Thanks for the reminder. Have a blessed week. Carol
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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I'm glad it's only 75% fiction for you. I had the very same experience this morning, and that isn't funny or fiction. Cute poem. I like the repeated line throughout, and the great rhymes. Yes, writing helps our brain cells. Thanks for the reminder. Have a blessed week. Carol
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Hi Carol, you are so sweet and I appreciate so very much your kind review and comments.
I thank you with all my heart, my dear friend. Love and hugs, Debi
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Getting older is such fun some days! Not! LOL.
Comment from Katiemae1977
This is totally cute Debi and I got a real kick out of it!
It makes any person over 45 laugh but not too hard as serious memory problems are not funny. At your age I wouldn't worry about it. It's probably a little old age forgetfulness and nothing to panic about.
Good rhyme and meter make for a smooth read.
Take care
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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This is totally cute Debi and I got a real kick out of it!
It makes any person over 45 laugh but not too hard as serious memory problems are not funny. At your age I wouldn't worry about it. It's probably a little old age forgetfulness and nothing to panic about.
Good rhyme and meter make for a smooth read.
Take care
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Hey Sweetie!! Who you calling old? Hahahaha. No, I will not give in to old age and like I said in the box right by the title, it was 75% fiction. It was just something I mostly made up as I went. I wonder if anybody reads those because everyone is laughing but takin me serious. I just really needed a good laugh today so I did this one to help others laugh with me.
Thanks so much, Katie. Yes, I am turning 70 next month and having trouble with the fact but even tho I live in pain and have since I was 25 when diagnosed w lupus, I try to keep a good attitude. I have one suggestion for you. Don't blink, cause it goes so fast after 40. I have a son your age who was also born in 77.
Anyway, thanks so much for the fun review and comments and for the lovely stars. You are so sweet. I can't wait to spread a little sunshine your way, my dear friend. As yours is in almost a month. So that means you can send me info about yourself any time between now and then. Ok? Thanks again!!
Love and hugs. Debi
