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Comment from BOO ghost
Awe, another beautiful picture! I read the rules via your author notes. aurora lights
carry nostalgic seeds
blooming in my eyes
This is my favorite stanza.
Is it a myth, the eyes are the windows to the soul? Senryu Suite, looks like a great poem, as always!
BOO!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
Awe, another beautiful picture! I read the rules via your author notes. aurora lights
carry nostalgic seeds
blooming in my eyes
This is my favorite stanza.
Is it a myth, the eyes are the windows to the soul? Senryu Suite, looks like a great poem, as always!
BOO!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy hugs 😊
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You a posting machine! You got a twin?
Comment from RJ Heritage
Very artistic and well expressed emotions of love and the longing for it to be fulfilled by that special person.
It seems that she once had his love, but now she alludes to it through nostalgia and faithful memories.
RJ
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
Very artistic and well expressed emotions of love and the longing for it to be fulfilled by that special person.
It seems that she once had his love, but now she alludes to it through nostalgia and faithful memories.
RJ
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy hugs 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
Wow, Gypsy, I love it! Again, you nailed it! I read it from the beginning to the end... it's smooth, flawless & love the meaning of it. Again, your writing is exceptional, including your artwork choice are so great. Again, I have only 5star. Wishing you winning it!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
Wow, Gypsy, I love it! Again, you nailed it! I read it from the beginning to the end... it's smooth, flawless & love the meaning of it. Again, your writing is exceptional, including your artwork choice are so great. Again, I have only 5star. Wishing you winning it!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, iDri.Luv.Jesus
Gypsy hugs 😊
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You're so welcome, and have a nice day!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem is an excellent expression of separation from a loved one, whether it be forced or not. Separation is separation. The emotion is strong as is the wanting. You did a wonderful job with the poem and the presentation.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
This poem is an excellent expression of separation from a loved one, whether it be forced or not. Separation is separation. The emotion is strong as is the wanting. You did a wonderful job with the poem and the presentation.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
The picture and framing, as always, is done to please the eye. The poetry is full of loss and longing. I swear the boxes breed during the night. More unpacking! Karen
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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
The picture and framing, as always, is done to please the eye. The poetry is full of loss and longing. I swear the boxes breed during the night. More unpacking! Karen
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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oh, no. I hate moving but a new place can be fun.
Thank you very much, Karen
Gypsy hugs 😊
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:-)
Comment from shelley kaye
wow this was an excellent imagistic poem of bittersweet memories
great senryu suite with smooth flow and deep feeling
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
wow this was an excellent imagistic poem of bittersweet memories
great senryu suite with smooth flow and deep feeling
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. Your exceptional six stars review means a lot to me.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from royowen
What a lovely way of expressing the feeling of separation, either from enforced separation, through geographical distance, a breakup, it doesn't all are very upsetting, a wonderful free verse Gypsy, blessings Roy,
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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
What a lovely way of expressing the feeling of separation, either from enforced separation, through geographical distance, a breakup, it doesn't all are very upsetting, a wonderful free verse Gypsy, blessings Roy,
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy. 🙂
Gypsy hugs
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Well done.