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Comment from BOO ghost
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Awe, another beautiful picture! I read the rules via your author notes. aurora lights

carry nostalgic seeds

blooming in my eyes

This is my favorite stanza.

Is it a myth, the eyes are the windows to the soul? Senryu Suite, looks like a great poem, as always!

BOO!






 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much,

    Gypsy hugs 😊
reply by BOO ghost on 25-Jul-2024
    You a posting machine! You got a twin?
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Very artistic and well expressed emotions of love and the longing for it to be fulfilled by that special person.
It seems that she once had his love, but now she alludes to it through nostalgia and faithful memories.
RJ

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, RJ

    Gypsy hugs 😊
reply by RJ Heritage on 25-Jul-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ
Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
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Wow, Gypsy, I love it! Again, you nailed it! I read it from the beginning to the end... it's smooth, flawless & love the meaning of it. Again, your writing is exceptional, including your artwork choice are so great. Again, I have only 5star. Wishing you winning it!

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, iDri.Luv.Jesus

    Gypsy hugs 😊
reply by iDri.Luv.Jesus on 25-Jul-2024
    You're so welcome, and have a nice day!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This poem is an excellent expression of separation from a loved one, whether it be forced or not. Separation is separation. The emotion is strong as is the wanting. You did a wonderful job with the poem and the presentation.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.

    Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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The picture and framing, as always, is done to please the eye. The poetry is full of loss and longing. I swear the boxes breed during the night. More unpacking! Karen

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 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
    oh, no. I hate moving but a new place can be fun.
    Thank you very much, Karen

    Gypsy hugs 😊
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 25-Jul-2024
    :-)
Comment from shelley kaye
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wow this was an excellent imagistic poem of bittersweet memories
great senryu suite with smooth flow and deep feeling

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley. Your exceptional six stars review means a lot to me.

    Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from royowen
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What a lovely way of expressing the feeling of separation, either from enforced separation, through geographical distance, a breakup, it doesn't all are very upsetting, a wonderful free verse Gypsy, blessings Roy,

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 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
    Thank you very much, Roy. 🙂

    Gypsy hugs
reply by royowen on 25-Jul-2024
    Well done.