Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lovely rhyming quatrains!! And I loved "The best is that their love remains,
A symphony of lovely strains." You said it beautifully! Thanks for making time to do this with all that you are juggling now.

 Comment Written 20-May-2024

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reply by the author on 21-May-2024

Thanks, Helen, for the great review and your kind words. It's the first poem I've written in a while, but I didn't want to neglect such a special occasion (even though I'm late). I'm glad so many have taken the time to wish them well. I hope you're doing well. We'll catch up soon. I'm having a pacemaker implant on 5/30, so I hope that improves my energy level. Love & prayers, and a huge hug!

Comment from gansach

Excellent

This is a lovely tribute poem for Debi and Glen's 50th wedding anniversary. The presentation is very good, bright and attractive. Your rhymes and rhythm are great. Well done!

 Comment Written 20-May-2024

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reply by the author on 21-May-2024

Thank you so much for the great review and your kind words. I'm sorry I haven't met you earlier on FS, but I will check out your portfolio when I'm able. Have a blessed week. Carol

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

How beautiful, Carol..... Debi and Glen are going to love all the wonderful poems people have written for them including yours. I wish I could write poetry, but it has been fun reading all of them. Well done!
Smiles, Carol


Hope things are better for you and your husband.

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 Comment Written 20-May-2024

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reply by the author on 21-May-2024

Thank you, Carol, for the great review and your kind words. The poem is the first I've written in quite a while, but I didn't want to miss such a special occasion.
My husband has had several setbacks, but things are heading in a better direction now. I will have a pacemaker implant on 5/30, and I hope it improves my energy level considerably. I appreciate your prayers. Blessings & hugs. Carol

reply by Begin Again on 22-May-2024

Oh heavens,Carol...I didn't know you were having health issues too. This has been doubly hard on you. My thoughts and prayers are with you always. Love, Carol

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Carol, This is a very lovely and well written congratulation poem for Debi and Glen on their 50th anniversary. You used very lovely words and lovely imagery. love and blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 20-May-2024

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reply by the author on 20-May-2024

Thank you, Teri. I haven't written much lately, so I'm glad to be able to post today. Mitch is still recovering and I was very sick this weekend. Hopefully we're both on the mend. I hope you are doing well. Love & prayers. Carol