Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Such strong emotions of love and passion. Or is it of passionate love? Their allusions to the natural world and the things of nature highten the strength of the expressed emotions.
Nicely done.
RJ

 Comment Written 17-May-2024

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reply by the author on 17-May-2024

It's passionate love....always.

Thank you very much, my friend. Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy

Comment from royowen

Excellent

What a lovely post you've written here Gypsy, the words would be most treasured and received by whoever received them dear girl, as always your beautiful poetry paints portraits, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 16-May-2024

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reply by the author on 16-May-2024

Thank you very much, Roy

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Those are the words of such loving devotion that's rare among humans. Like a mother's love. Like God's love for us.
I wondered about "cavin's cedar scent" (cabin's?)

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 Comment Written 16-May-2024

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reply by the author on 16-May-2024

Thank you very much, big sister. I fixed it. I kept going back and for... lol

Thank you very much, big sister.

Love

Marival

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

not sure about "gust" ending both of the first two stanzas

other than that, this was a wonderful love poem with great imagery

thank you for sharing
shelley :)


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 Comment Written 16-May-2024

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reply by the author on 16-May-2024

Thank you very much, Shelley.

Gypsy