Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Hi Gypsy.

I absolutely love the photo used for your haiku...

Crescent moon with heavy thoughts!

I'm thinking heavy thoughts because the elephant is sitting on the bench and is in fact a large animal.

I was always fascinated with elephants, and always found them adorable.

Excellent post.
John

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024

Thank you very much, John

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That picture is so adorable! I think it would be great in any child's room. While it makes me sad that the little elephant has "heavy" thoughts but perhaps they are just philosophically deep and the "heavy" reminds us of how heavy elephants are.

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024

Yes, the picture came first. It's so cute. Maybe I can draw it.

Thank you very much, big sister.

Love,

Marival

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Cute little guy.The verses a re short but sweet. I am thinking myself about why he is so fascinated by the celestial body. When I was five years old I would call out to the moon. My neighbors c all me Moon or Moonie.
Brings by nice memories.
RJ

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024

I'm happy it brings good memories. Thank you very much, RJ

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