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15 total reviews 
Comment from Heather Knight
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I love everything you write, Marival. The problem is that my reviews are quite repetitive:
- no typos or errors
- the most beautiful pictures ever
- the most stylish presentation
- the most spectacular words and feelings.
Muchas gracias. Te mereces un seis.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Gracias, guapa. No te preocupes a mi me Pasa igual.

    Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from Mia Twysted
Excellent
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I find this piece very inspiring. The color gave the reader motion as it described the magical mysteries in the world and the feelings one can have for another.

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 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from Esther Brown
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Beautiful and thrilled my soul. Very best of luck on the contest! You do love so well. I would not change a thing! Smiling and remembering, wishing I could capture in so few words. Esther

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Esther, I appreciate your exceptional six-star review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Wow. This was beautiful. The flow was so effortless as the romance and want lingered from one line to the next. Beautifully written. Good luck in the contest. Gretchen

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Gretchen, I appreciate your exceptional six-star review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
Excellent
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This is extremely well done and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writings and I also wish a good end of the week. Patricia .

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 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much for the review and kind words.

    Gypsy