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Comment from LJbutterfly
I loved this Easter poem where you captured the meaning and life of Christ. This is the perfect reminder that Christ, the Lamb of God, died to redeem us so we could have everlasting life with Him, if we accept and believe. Your artwork and video paired perfectly and beautifully.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
I loved this Easter poem where you captured the meaning and life of Christ. This is the perfect reminder that Christ, the Lamb of God, died to redeem us so we could have everlasting life with Him, if we accept and believe. Your artwork and video paired perfectly and beautifully.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Lorraine, I sure appreciate the beautiful review. Thank you so much for all the kind words. You are right that we have to praise God all we can, because it seems there are so many that don't seem to get it.
By the way, Regina says to say hi to you.
Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Dawn Munro
Of course, the minute I read the title of this sweet poem, I had to read it (although I don't have a lot of time to spend online today). As always, my friend, well done -- a story that cannot be told enough, IMO.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
Of course, the minute I read the title of this sweet poem, I had to read it (although I don't have a lot of time to spend online today). As always, my friend, well done -- a story that cannot be told enough, IMO.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Hi Dawn, thanks for the incredible review for my Risen poem. I appreciate it so very much. Thanks also for your kind comments, my awesome friend.
Love, Debi
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It's always my pleasure, Debi. :)
Comment from Cedar
Hello Debi,
You have penned a very beautiful poem for this coming Easter. Each and everyone of your couplets states exactly how our Saviour gave His life for us according to God's gospel. And, your inline rhyming made it even more realistic.
Thank you for sharing this glorious piece of work with all of us.
Happy Easter...Bill
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
Hello Debi,
You have penned a very beautiful poem for this coming Easter. Each and everyone of your couplets states exactly how our Saviour gave His life for us according to God's gospel. And, your inline rhyming made it even more realistic.
Thank you for sharing this glorious piece of work with all of us.
Happy Easter...Bill
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Hi Bill, thanks for the incredible review for my Risen poem. I appreciate it so very much. And once again, it is so good to meet you. Thanks also for your kind comments and your generous six stars, my friend. That means the world to me.
Love, Debi
Comment from Begin Again
Beautiful! A wonderful EAster poem to remind us what the Lord as done for us, giving his life for our sins, and promising to bless us forever through eternity if we believe and have faith. Loved it!
Smiles and hugs,
Carol
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
Beautiful! A wonderful EAster poem to remind us what the Lord as done for us, giving his life for our sins, and promising to bless us forever through eternity if we believe and have faith. Loved it!
Smiles and hugs,
Carol
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Hi Carol, thanks for the incredible review for my Risen poem. I appreciate it so very much. Thanks also for your kind comments, my awesome friend.
And some big hugs right back~atcha Love, Debi
Comment from Mustang Patty
Good morning!
Your inspirational poem about following Christ and telling His story helped me feel the joy of this Lenten Season. In just one week, I will start my ritual to celebrate Easter Week and the days leading up to the time He walked with and hung from the Cross.
~patty~
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
Good morning!
Your inspirational poem about following Christ and telling His story helped me feel the joy of this Lenten Season. In just one week, I will start my ritual to celebrate Easter Week and the days leading up to the time He walked with and hung from the Cross.
~patty~
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Hi Patty, thanks for the incredible review for my Risen poem. I appreciate it so very much. Gosh, I sure appreciate the generous six stars too!
Thanks also for your kind comments, my awesome friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Not only does the Easter message make this a beautiful poem, but your ability to use internal rhyme so well is remarkable. It flows smoothly right to it ending line. Happy Easter.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
Not only does the Easter message make this a beautiful poem, but your ability to use internal rhyme so well is remarkable. It flows smoothly right to it ending line. Happy Easter.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Ginda, thanks for the incredible review for my Risen poem. I appreciate it so very much. Thanks also for your kind comments, my awesome friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from bob cullen
There are so many things to like about this poem. First up, the message it contains. Second, the rhyme, especially the internal rhyme contained on each second line.
I never tire of reading your work.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
There are so many things to like about this poem. First up, the message it contains. Second, the rhyme, especially the internal rhyme contained on each second line.
I never tire of reading your work.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Bob, you did it again with such an incredible review for my Risen poem. I appreciate it so very much. Thanks also for your kind comments, and for your very generous six stars! You are so appreciated, my awesome friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Such a beautiful Easter poem. I liked the format this was written in. The picture that accompanies it and the springtime blue background are perfect for the poem. Thanks for sharing this blessing.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
Such a beautiful Easter poem. I liked the format this was written in. The picture that accompanies it and the springtime blue background are perfect for the poem. Thanks for sharing this blessing.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Hi Marilyn, this is what I call a wraparound. Normally they have another line to them, but I wanted to keep this one simple. Thanks so much for the kind words, sweetie. I sure appreciate it. Love, Debi
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
What a beautiful poem meant to remind all of us we only live because He lives. There is nothing more important in life than to find Jesus, know His story, and belief He is our Savior.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
What a beautiful poem meant to remind all of us we only live because He lives. There is nothing more important in life than to find Jesus, know His story, and belief He is our Savior.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Dear Carol, I agree one hundred percent about the importance of Jesus.
I thank you for this lovely review of my early Easter poem, as I didn't want to post it so close to April Fool's day.
I just felt the need to write about Jesus and remind people of His love for us.
Thanks for your kind words for this poem, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Boogienights
This is a lovely rhyming poem about how the world was saved by Jesus. It's nice that your poem tells the story of what Easter is all about. I'll read it to my granddaughter. she's only 2, but is growing to love poetry, and this is one l think she'll like, even uf she doesn't understsnd.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
This is a lovely rhyming poem about how the world was saved by Jesus. It's nice that your poem tells the story of what Easter is all about. I'll read it to my granddaughter. she's only 2, but is growing to love poetry, and this is one l think she'll like, even uf she doesn't understsnd.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Hi Sharon, it is never too young to teach grandkids about Jesus. I thank you for this lovely review of my early Easter poem, as I didn't want to post it so close to April Fool's day.
I just felt the need to write about Jesus and remind people of His love for us.
Thanks for your kind words for this poem, dear friend. Love, Debi