Shade Fades
a 5-7-519 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You managed to include three seasons here as the summer fades into Autumn and the Winter follows, I wish you luck with the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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You managed to include three seasons here as the summer fades into Autumn and the Winter follows, I wish you luck with the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from Gunner Lil
Nicely done. Got the 5-7-5 on the nose!
Enjoyed reading this poem.
It is an easy read with perfect flow and has a good pace,
Good luck in the contest!
Thank you!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Nicely done. Got the 5-7-5 on the nose!
Enjoyed reading this poem.
It is an easy read with perfect flow and has a good pace,
Good luck in the contest!
Thank you!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Gunner
Comment from Deborah Dybowski
You have written a good 5-7-5 poem using the word autumn. The picture you have chosen is perfect for your poem, as well as the alliteration you have selected.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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You have written a good 5-7-5 poem using the word autumn. The picture you have chosen is perfect for your poem, as well as the alliteration you have selected.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Deborah
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
Autumn is my all time favourite season.
I don't understand why many see it as a dying season .. those vivid hues warm my heart.
PS: Your font would stand out better if black , that yellow fades too much into the orange .
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Ciao!
Autumn is my all time favourite season.
I don't understand why many see it as a dying season .. those vivid hues warm my heart.
PS: Your font would stand out better if black , that yellow fades too much into the orange .
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you, T, I'll give it a shot.
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Looks much better! 😐
Comment from QC Poet
A very cool Autumn poem in a conforming 5-7-5 poem format the picture and presentation in Autumn colors is also a great touch Good Luck to you in the contest
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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A very cool Autumn poem in a conforming 5-7-5 poem format the picture and presentation in Autumn colors is also a great touch Good Luck to you in the contest
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you, QC
Comment from jessizero
It feels like we only have autumn for a few days where I live, but you make it sound great. You managed to work three seasons in one poem, which is awesome. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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It feels like we only have autumn for a few days where I live, but you make it sound great. You managed to work three seasons in one poem, which is awesome. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Jessizero
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I liked your poem. Words that you used went well with the picture. The picture was very colorful. Spring is my favorite season. I can't wait. Very good job on this
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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I liked your poem. Words that you used went well with the picture. The picture was very colorful. Spring is my favorite season. I can't wait. Very good job on this
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Brenda.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a beautiful and well-described poem! You use vivid imagery and strong words. I enjoyed reviewing this, as will others. Excellent image. Soon, in the US, we are moving from Winter to Spring. Have a good day!
Alex
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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This is a beautiful and well-described poem! You use vivid imagery and strong words. I enjoyed reviewing this, as will others. Excellent image. Soon, in the US, we are moving from Winter to Spring. Have a good day!
Alex
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Alex
Comment from teafor2
Unknown bard: With this succinct little ditty you've captured the entire
essence of the picture, my undivided attention and heart. All requirements
met for the writing prompt. Good luck. teafor2
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Unknown bard: With this succinct little ditty you've captured the entire
essence of the picture, my undivided attention and heart. All requirements
met for the writing prompt. Good luck. teafor2
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you, T42
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You are welcome.