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Heroes in the Hallways

An ode

32 total reviews 
Comment from zanya
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Wow , simply beautful, heartfelt sentiments for a teacher, committed to her craft, expressed here fulsomely in this ode. How nice to read good tidings for the teaching profession.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
    Thank you, this means so much to me! Xo
Comment from Daylily
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You have poetically described a marvelous teacher...one who cares about the wellbeing of each student, especially those in need of reassurance. Life can deal out a lot of tough hands, but when a person has been prepared to play them well, there are people in the background who helped cause it to happen.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
    Thank you, so well said! Xo
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a lovely poem for this special teacher.
-I am retired from teaching high school, and I
still have mementos from some of my special students.
I can still remember some of them, and why they were special.
-This sounds like a wonderful teacher who had a gift.
-She recognized something in your daughter and was
able to bring it out.
-You wrote a lovely ode for her.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Pam! That means so much to me! Xo
reply by Pam (respa) on 06-Jan-2024
    You are very welcome.
Comment from royowen
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My wife was a teacher, actually she still is, she teaches in a University for the third age, French to retirees, she is amazing, all they get is an in occupation that general have society's lack of respect, whereas when I was young, they were, this is beautifully written, in ballad style, 8686 abab beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much! Xo
reply by royowen on 06-Jan-2024
    Pleasure
Comment from Michele Harber
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What a beautiful poem, and what an amazing tribute! The teacher you describe sounds incredible, and your child is lucky to have her. Believe it or not, there are other teachers as caring as she is. I'm married to one such person, have others as friends, and am pleased that my own daughter benefitted from two such teachers neither she nor I will ever forget. What your daughter's teacher has, that the others don't, is an incredible poet such as yourself to appreciate them and sing their praises. I respect that you recognized what this person did, and took the time to publicly acknowledge and praise her. Too much of what teachers do goes unappreciated and unremarked upon.

From a poetic standpoint, your poem flows beautifully, and your abab rhyme scheme is impeccable. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
    Michele, thank you for your lovely comment. It truly means so much to me. Teachers are indeed underappreciated; I couldn't agree more! They should be celebrated for the work they do and the impact they have. Thank you again, and a big thanks to your spouse, as well! Xo
reply by Michele Harber on 06-Jan-2024
    You're so sweet!

    Teachers are definitely national treasures. It's about time the nation realized.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a skilful write, full of good rhymes and perfect metre and the sentiment is warm and guiding, I wish you luck with the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
    Thank you, dolly, that means so much to me! Xo
Comment from lyenochka
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What a beautiful ode to teachers! I heartily agree! The teacher's work is never done just in the classroom. She cares for each child and thinks of them at home, too. So glad that this teacher helped your daughter and all her other students, too. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much, Helen! Xo
Comment from NanaGaye
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What an amazing poem you have written and how true. The rhyming is perfect and the picture chosen. Teachers are amazing, their patience, their energy their love. Good luck with the contest

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
    Thank you, this means so much to me! Xo
Comment from LJbutterfly
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This is a beautiful Ode, filled with sincerity, warmth and appreciation for a dedicated and caring teacher. Positive experiences of young children helps formulate their attitudes and responses to education for the rest of their lives.

Your well thought out poem includes all the major attributes of an exceptional teacher. Your heartfelt thoughts flow as smoothly as harmonious music. I truly enjoyed reading your Ode. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
    Thank you, this truly means so much! Xo
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, there Anonymous,
What a lovely poem filled with praise for teachers. I think teaching is one of those things that is truly a 'calling.' Especially those who teach either the first few grades or those important high school years.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,
~MP~

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
    Thank you, I truly appreciate it! Xo