Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Interesting write. I think your dialog is great and keeps a good flow of the story. I see nothing wrong worth mentioning. It has good drama one of those I

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023

Thanks, Ben, for this nice review. I appreciate it. Gretchen

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

This is a good story! And you leave us hanging. And I'm sorry, but I must have missed the bad language part. I just wanted to read more. However,
sounds to me like Mitch is more concerned about their safety than she is, but I haven't read what came before. Anyway, very good.
Katharine

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 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023

Thank you for checking this out. I appreciate this review. Gretchen

Comment from Brandon Clark

Exceptional

Exceptionally realistic! Every word was on point and I could literally see the two scenes at the trailer and "The Little Eagle." Again, not a word was wasted and it literally shows the reader what's transpiring. Excellent job!!

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023

Wow. Thank you so much for this. I really appreciate the kind words and the six. Gretchen

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

This was a great chapter. Sixes are back, tomorrow. Plenty of drama and caring etc. It is good she is appreciating the young officer's looking out for her. Funny how she is not takng the Graffiti thing all that seriously, considering other threats. No spgs.

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 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023

I think Miranda has a default setting. She gets upset then forces herself to move on. Thank you so much for this nice review. Gretchen