Comment from wierdgrace

Excellent

I came in in the middle of this story, so had to try and bring the story together, I did not edit it or check for grammar, as I am reading for pleasure, I can not wait to read more of your book.

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 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022

Thank you very much! Gretchen

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

I like that Miranda is so normal, with insecurities just like everyone else. I am enjoying the read, and I think you are pacing it very well with reflective times interspersed with action. Well done.
Wendy

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 Comment Written 21-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022

Thank you so much. I appreciate the feedback. Gretchen

Comment from Jay Squires

Exceptional

Hi, Gretchen. This was a very tender, subtly revealing chapter for our main character. After catching Missy in the act, unable to hide from the fact that she (Miranda, I mean) is aging, she needs warm lies to the contrary. Aaron proves himself to be the friend she needs right now. Of course, we all know it must go beyond that ... sometime. I love your delicate control of the characters.

Jay

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022

Thank you so much. I value your feedback and revelations. Gretchen