The Miranda Chronicles
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 " What am I Thinking Now (Miranda"Miranda solves a mystery.
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was great. Love the observation that it's always "I" and never "we". The story is very interesting. I thought the dialogue (and tension) over the discussion about the pot was well done. It easily kept my interest and the writing is solid!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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I thought this was great. Love the observation that it's always "I" and never "we". The story is very interesting. I thought the dialogue (and tension) over the discussion about the pot was well done. It easily kept my interest and the writing is solid!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Thank you. I do appreciate your time to read and the splendid review. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
Enjoying your writing a lot. Miranda has guts and I like her strength of character. Missy is a piece of work, and the relationship tensions between the two are very vivid, and sound authentic. Looking forward to the next, and the development of the drama between them. Well written.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Enjoying your writing a lot. Miranda has guts and I like her strength of character. Missy is a piece of work, and the relationship tensions between the two are very vivid, and sound authentic. Looking forward to the next, and the development of the drama between them. Well written.
Wendy
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Thanks, Wendy. I am so glad you are sticking with my story. I appreciate your kind review. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
Another "true-to-life" chapter in a lot of ways. I am sure there are these types out there. You have a great writing style. Keep up the great work, I always look forward to more from you.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Another "true-to-life" chapter in a lot of ways. I am sure there are these types out there. You have a great writing style. Keep up the great work, I always look forward to more from you.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much. I appreciate the time you took to review and read this installment of the story. Have a great week. Gretchen
Comment from BermyBye50
GWHARGIS,
Your story encompasses all the emotion and tension between the characters in this intensely complex relational story involving a deeply personal dilemma. Each paragraph is engaging and captures the attention of the reader. Your strategic use of dialogue enhances the tension woven throughout this brilliant story. Well done.
All the best,
Eugene
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GWHARGIS,
Your story encompasses all the emotion and tension between the characters in this intensely complex relational story involving a deeply personal dilemma. Each paragraph is engaging and captures the attention of the reader. Your strategic use of dialogue enhances the tension woven throughout this brilliant story. Well done.
All the best,
Eugene
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much, Eugene. I appreciate the time you took to read my story and your kind words in your review. Gretchen
