The Miranda Chronicles
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Muddy Drawers"Miranda solves a mystery.
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
Marinda certainly has her hands full with those two goof-balls. I agree with Aaron. Marinda is one tough chick. LOL
I would not have ventured anywhere close to the edge of that pond. Had to laugh at their predicament of muddy clothes. UGH!
Fun chapter. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Marinda certainly has her hands full with those two goof-balls. I agree with Aaron. Marinda is one tough chick. LOL
I would not have ventured anywhere close to the edge of that pond. Had to laugh at their predicament of muddy clothes. UGH!
Fun chapter. Nancy:)
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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They have suddenly become a force to be reckoned with. Lol. Thank you so much for this incredible rating and review. Gretchen
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! Yes, I think Miranda has to be the only one! Great chapter and I can imagine how they looked and smelled. That Aaron is certainly not the sharpest took in the shed to suggest going to lunch undressed like that after swimming in a swamp!
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Lol! Yes, I think Miranda has to be the only one! Great chapter and I can imagine how they looked and smelled. That Aaron is certainly not the sharpest took in the shed to suggest going to lunch undressed like that after swimming in a swamp!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Aaron is that hapless guy who is loyal and happy but needs someone around to keep him focused. Thank you so much for this excellent review. Much appreciated. Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Gretchen,
Though I read this first, and it makes a little more sense after reading the first entry, I believe it could have almost stood alone. I'm looking forward to the next installment. Well done gal.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Hello Gretchen,
Though I read this first, and it makes a little more sense after reading the first entry, I believe it could have almost stood alone. I'm looking forward to the next installment. Well done gal.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
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Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much. Makes my day to know you'll come back for more. Gretchen
Comment from prettybluebirds
I like the humor in this story. I read the chapter just before this one. This chapter is well done, and the dialogue is excellent. You took me into the story and I could picture every scene. That's what good writing is about.
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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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I like the humor in this story. I read the chapter just before this one. This chapter is well done, and the dialogue is excellent. You took me into the story and I could picture every scene. That's what good writing is about.
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Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for this nice review. I appreciate the comments.
Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
Yet another great read. I am imagining them all wet and smelly with not much on. I can't wait for your next chapter. I suppose Aaron and Miranda are too far apart to get something going?
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Yet another great read. I am imagining them all wet and smelly with not much on. I can't wait for your next chapter. I suppose Aaron and Miranda are too far apart to get something going?
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much for this. I appreciate your time to read and review. But most of all I'm thankful you're enjoying it. Gretchen
