Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "God's Grace"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A deeply moving and faithful acrostic filled with spiritual praise. A fine acrostic for the contest and I enjoyed the choice of words and end rhymes, good luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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A deeply moving and faithful acrostic filled with spiritual praise. A fine acrostic for the contest and I enjoyed the choice of words and end rhymes, good luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Smiling back! Have a blessed day!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Acrostic poems are certainly not the easiest to write, but to write one that rhymes is even more difficult. You have aced this one, IMO. Good for you! Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Acrostic poems are certainly not the easiest to write, but to write one that rhymes is even more difficult. You have aced this one, IMO. Good for you! Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your validation!
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem tells us of the importance of forgiveness that we got from Jesus's death. I am glad you bolder the letters because it made it easier to see the acrostic. Toe chose good artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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This poem tells us of the importance of forgiveness that we got from Jesus's death. I am glad you bolder the letters because it made it easier to see the acrostic. Toe chose good artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thanks 🙏
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You?re welcome
Dp
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I enjoy acrostic poems - both reading and writing them. You've written a good one here.
I like "his precious love to square sins that are wrought . . ." You don't hear the expression "to square" much anymore, but it works really well here.
A terrific entry into this contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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I enjoy acrostic poems - both reading and writing them. You've written a good one here.
I like "his precious love to square sins that are wrought . . ." You don't hear the expression "to square" much anymore, but it works really well here.
A terrific entry into this contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Pam thank you! 🙏🙏
Comment from Ulla
Ah yes, your faith certainly shines through this wonderful acrostic poem. It's a difficult form to write and make it flow naturally, but I think you have achieved that. Good luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Ah yes, your faith certainly shines through this wonderful acrostic poem. It's a difficult form to write and make it flow naturally, but I think you have achieved that. Good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Ulla, by sincere thank you!
Comment from karenina
Perfectly rhymed and such an amazing, important message within! None of us are so far removed that God is not anxious to welcome us back to the fold!
Grace awaits!
Karenina
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Perfectly rhymed and such an amazing, important message within! None of us are so far removed that God is not anxious to welcome us back to the fold!
Grace awaits!
Karenina
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Karenina, yes, your wisdom is so true, thanks for sharing your comments.
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A pleasure...
Comment from Iza Deleanu
God's Grace showers us every day, but we think we deserve it. If we will say more often thank you our life will be different. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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God's Grace showers us every day, but we think we deserve it. If we will say more often thank you our life will be different. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Iza, yes, your wisdom is so true, thanks for sharing your comments
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is interesting and entertaining to read. Exceptional work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is interesting and entertaining to read. Exceptional work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Raul I and honored and humbled to receive this six-star validation THANK YOU.!
Comment from kahpot
"Redemption is sealed by the spirit" "His life sacrificed" "ending all man's sins" in this wonderful acrostic there are some powerful lines and messages for all to read, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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"Redemption is sealed by the spirit" "His life sacrificed" "ending all man's sins" in this wonderful acrostic there are some powerful lines and messages for all to read, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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kahpot, yes, your wisdom is so true, thanks for sharing your comments and for your validation of these words.
Comment from John Ciarmello
God's Grace. I loved this one. There are so many of these for the contest that are contenders, and yours is no exception. It's elegant and word worthy in every way. Well done! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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God's Grace. I loved this one. There are so many of these for the contest that are contenders, and yours is no exception. It's elegant and word worthy in every way. Well done! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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JohnC. yes, your wisdom is so true there are so many and that excites me that this is os! Thanks for sharing your comments and validation.