Don't Be So Subservient
Denise's position after marriage (50-word dribble)13 total reviews
Comment from Pantygynt
Now this is just superb! It stands every shibboleth on its head. Who is getting the thrill, the speedboat driver or the water skier? The only way I can answer this is to say that when I went on my first honeymoon. I had to pay a professional speedboat driver when I went water skiing. My wife? She didn't want to either drive or ski. She was happy to watch from our hotel room's balcony.
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Now this is just superb! It stands every shibboleth on its head. Who is getting the thrill, the speedboat driver or the water skier? The only way I can answer this is to say that when I went on my first honeymoon. I had to pay a professional speedboat driver when I went water skiing. My wife? She didn't want to either drive or ski. She was happy to watch from our hotel room's balcony.
Comment Written 15-May-2022
Comment from Wendy G
Oh I do like this. Led us totally up the wrong path and then a clever and funny finale. Best wishes for the Dribble Flash Fiction. Should do well!
Wendy
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Oh I do like this. Led us totally up the wrong path and then a clever and funny finale. Best wishes for the Dribble Flash Fiction. Should do well!
Wendy
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Comment Written 15-May-2022
Comment from royowen
Reminds me of a song called Frontseat/backseat, that wasn't quite the same but these days what distresses me is the gap is widening in the gender battle, but this makes light of that, and I'm so glad you put a light mark to it, well done, blessings Roy
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Reminds me of a song called Frontseat/backseat, that wasn't quite the same but these days what distresses me is the gap is widening in the gender battle, but this makes light of that, and I'm so glad you put a light mark to it, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 15-May-2022
