Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from Gloria ....
This is exquisitely written author. The shape of Joseph's Star must've taken a bit of time.
Excellent celebration of Easter coming, and I wish you great with the voters.
Gloria
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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This is exquisitely written author. The shape of Joseph's Star must've taken a bit of time.
Excellent celebration of Easter coming, and I wish you great with the voters.
Gloria
Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Gloria, we are all winners as Holy week unfolds.
Comment from 1Dreamer
I believe every word you echo here and I believe in my heart the time is now. Love how you framed this. It is such a powerful message and a warning to be listened to. Many blessings!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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I believe every word you echo here and I believe in my heart the time is now. Love how you framed this. It is such a powerful message and a warning to be listened to. Many blessings!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Happy Easter, believer! Thank you!
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Happy Easter to you as well!
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
You are clearly a committed Christian. You write very clearly not disguising the message. Also you have taken the trouble to shape it in an interesting way. I enjoyed reading this one, well done. Giddy
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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You are clearly a committed Christian. You write very clearly not disguising the message. Also you have taken the trouble to shape it in an interesting way. I enjoyed reading this one, well done. Giddy
Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Happy Easter, believer! Thank you! May Holy Week enfold you in Peace and Joy! 🙏🙏
Comment from MissMerri
This is such a meaningful and well-constructed poem, no matter the form. I loved the message, although I'd have preferred the word "this" in the fifth line, be "Him" which is less vague. The meaning is the same, and it is a great little poem, regardless. Wonderful Easter theme, and nicely illustrated too. I hope this does well in the contest. MM
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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This is such a meaningful and well-constructed poem, no matter the form. I loved the message, although I'd have preferred the word "this" in the fifth line, be "Him" which is less vague. The meaning is the same, and it is a great little poem, regardless. Wonderful Easter theme, and nicely illustrated too. I hope this does well in the contest. MM
Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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MM thank you.
Comment from mermaids
Excellent faith based poem that has a feel of joy and hope. You did well with the syllable count and have a strong steady beat with a musical feel to it. I like the last line "pray". It is a fitting last line.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Excellent faith based poem that has a feel of joy and hope. You did well with the syllable count and have a strong steady beat with a musical feel to it. I like the last line "pray". It is a fitting last line.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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I so appreciate your review and comments
Comment from royowen
Of course yesterday was the forerunner of the greatest weekend ever, when Jesus would open the veil, so that we who received the invitation would enter in to glory, a beautifully written Joseph's star. Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Of course yesterday was the forerunner of the greatest weekend ever, when Jesus would open the veil, so that we who received the invitation would enter in to glory, a beautifully written Joseph's star. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Yes , this Holy Week is what is glue that makes this crazy world of ours work? thanks Jim
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Well done
Comment from karenina
I haven't seen this form in ages. A perfect time of year to bring it forth...and inspired theme so filled with reverence, it was a pleasure to behold. Something to read and contemplate, to tuck into the soul. Excellent photo to accompany.
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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I haven't seen this form in ages. A perfect time of year to bring it forth...and inspired theme so filled with reverence, it was a pleasure to behold. Something to read and contemplate, to tuck into the soul. Excellent photo to accompany.
Karenina
Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Smiling back with great appreciation, thank you and Happy Easter.
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Happy Easter to you!
Comment from Janetsue
The message is clear and very believable with the world heading the way it is. The Good News message cannot be over-emphasized. This is a creative way to spread it.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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The message is clear and very believable with the world heading the way it is. The Good News message cannot be over-emphasized. This is a creative way to spread it.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Hi Spangle, I appreciate your review!
Comment from Jenifer Bellott
A lovely message. I appreciated the alliteration and assonance in the fourth line. You followed the rules of the contest prompt and crafted a nice, spiritual piece. Bravo, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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A lovely message. I appreciated the alliteration and assonance in the fourth line. You followed the rules of the contest prompt and crafted a nice, spiritual piece. Bravo, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Jenifer, thank you so much!
Comment from ~Dovey
Hello Poet!
Your Joseph's Star is in perfect presentation form. The subject chosen is relatable and the topic for which this style begs to be written.
Good luck in the contest!
Kim
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Hello Poet!
Your Joseph's Star is in perfect presentation form. The subject chosen is relatable and the topic for which this style begs to be written.
Good luck in the contest!
Kim
Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Kim, thanks much!