Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Old Has Been"Musings of an old man - 2022
28 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I think grumpy old women have similar thoughts, lol. You've done a marvelous job with those 25 words, it's fun, it rhymes, and brings on a smile. Well done, and good luck in the contest, I'm sure you have a winner here. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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I think grumpy old women have similar thoughts, lol. You've done a marvelous job with those 25 words, it's fun, it rhymes, and brings on a smile. Well done, and good luck in the contest, I'm sure you have a winner here. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Sandra, I thank you very much.
Comment from nomi338
Oh if only. At my age and the shape I am currently in. The ability to walk briskly would be a blessing. I fear that any attempt to chase a young hen around the yard would be laughed at so hard, that I might actually be able to sneak up on her while she is bent over laughing.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Oh if only. At my age and the shape I am currently in. The ability to walk briskly would be a blessing. I fear that any attempt to chase a young hen around the yard would be laughed at so hard, that I might actually be able to sneak up on her while she is bent over laughing.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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I commiserate dear friend, and laugh alongside you.
Comment from Bridge
A very interesting poem. You have managed to say a lot considering the constraints of the prompt. Very well written. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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A very interesting poem. You have managed to say a lot considering the constraints of the prompt. Very well written. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you for commenting, Bridge!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I know not who you are, but buy a car from the sixties, put down the top, drive to the beach, set in the sun, watch the boys and girls have fun, and maybe you'll get lucky, though more than likely if you do it will be a dream.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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I know not who you are, but buy a car from the sixties, put down the top, drive to the beach, set in the sun, watch the boys and girls have fun, and maybe you'll get lucky, though more than likely if you do it will be a dream.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Boy, I live that dream.
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have a great day
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 25 Words writing prompt contest. Good word count. I like the presentation.
Your poem is heartfelt and I agree. We should treat our elders with respect.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Excellent entry for the 25 Words writing prompt contest. Good word count. I like the presentation.
Your poem is heartfelt and I agree. We should treat our elders with respect.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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thank you.
Comment from Wendy G
A fun poem - but we all have to face reality sooner or later. However no-one deserves to be made to feel like a has-been, regardless. Sending you best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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A fun poem - but we all have to face reality sooner or later. However no-one deserves to be made to feel like a has-been, regardless. Sending you best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you Wendy.
Comment from poetwatch
Yeah, author, you hit the nail with the bat. :) As we age our younger selves often forget or treat us like we are not there. Yet, we walked in their shoes and know why. "Out with the old and in with the new." Is the cycle of life. Good entry for the 25-word Poem Contest. Thank you for caring.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Yeah, author, you hit the nail with the bat. :) As we age our younger selves often forget or treat us like we are not there. Yet, we walked in their shoes and know why. "Out with the old and in with the new." Is the cycle of life. Good entry for the 25-word Poem Contest. Thank you for caring.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from John Ciarmello
Well, this certainly is relatable! I refuse to tell you in which way. This is well done, and the words perfectly compliment the artwork. Thanks for sharing. I wish you much success with the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Well, this certainly is relatable! I refuse to tell you in which way. This is well done, and the words perfectly compliment the artwork. Thanks for sharing. I wish you much success with the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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John, thank you.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 25 words writing prompt entry, you executed it well. I found it to be humorous and sadly true. lol Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 25 words writing prompt entry, you executed it well. I found it to be humorous and sadly true. lol Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Thanks friend!
Comment from Paul McFarland
I don't remember giving you permission to write about me. You have done a really good job on the prompt, and you have managed to rhyme all the lines.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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I don't remember giving you permission to write about me. You have done a really good job on the prompt, and you have managed to rhyme all the lines.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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ha,ha, ha! Big smiles back with you!