Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
You did a good job on this poem. An experience most can relate to. The world is different now however, most can look back at a more peaceful time. Childhood memories are treasures.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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You did a good job on this poem. An experience most can relate to. The world is different now however, most can look back at a more peaceful time. Childhood memories are treasures.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Rachel, yes our lives are robust and far more complex indeed!
Comment from royowen
How interesting, I love to see the themes to this prompt, it's certainly thrown out a great variety of words and well put together poems on this theme, for boys it's got one thing in mind, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
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How interesting, I love to see the themes to this prompt, it's certainly thrown out a great variety of words and well put together poems on this theme, for boys it's got one thing in mind, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Smiling back!
Comment from tfawcus
Harking back to idyllic times through rose-tinted spectacles! I guess we all do it!
Mind you, life did seem a darned sight simpler then, even if a tad constricted.
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Harking back to idyllic times through rose-tinted spectacles! I guess we all do it!
Mind you, life did seem a darned sight simpler then, even if a tad constricted.
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Thanks Tony, yes life was not nearly as complex