Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

This is a very beautiful Lune poem about moonlight on a lake... something I'm particularly fond of. I think this will do well in the contest. I enjoyed it very much. MM

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021

Thank you for reading my poem. I live on the shores of Lake superior and I never get tired of it. Thanks again. :)

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This is a very good Lune poetry poem. I like it. Good rhymes. I wish you the best of luck in the contest! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck!

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021

Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)

reply by Raul1 on 03-Jan-2021

You're welcome!

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Love the image of the moon, bonus the mysterious lake: "Lake Superior

sparkles bright,

on a full moon night." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

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 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021

Thank you for reading. I live right next to lake superior and it never loses it's appeal. Thanks again.:)

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Very nicely written with perfect artwork as the accompaniment, Boogie. I enjoyed the aura that this verse brings to the reader. Well done and good luck.

Melissa

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 Comment Written 03-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021

Thanks so much. I don't usually enter short poems because I'm not very good at them...but I thought I'd give it a try. Thanks again. :)