Steve's Poems for Kids
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Teddy Bear"A collection of my children's poems
194 total reviews
Comment from Bellydanser
Ah! This is terrific entry. A lively tempo with great meter and rhyme. I love the lines:
"Blackbeard again!" I think with a chuckle.
"Oh where is my swash? Oh, where is my buckle?"
Good luck!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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Ah! This is terrific entry. A lively tempo with great meter and rhyme. I love the lines:
"Blackbeard again!" I think with a chuckle.
"Oh where is my swash? Oh, where is my buckle?"
Good luck!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind words and wishes.
Comment from barakas
What a lovely poem. Nice bouncy rhythm and simple to follow, making it good to read aloud to children. But even though I'm not a child, I really enjoyed reading this and it gets my vote.
I hesitate about clicking on that six star rating, but why not do it? I've read a lot of poems on site and I do believe this is faultless in every way.
Wishing you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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What a lovely poem. Nice bouncy rhythm and simple to follow, making it good to read aloud to children. But even though I'm not a child, I really enjoyed reading this and it gets my vote.
I hesitate about clicking on that six star rating, but why not do it? I've read a lot of poems on site and I do believe this is faultless in every way.
Wishing you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind words - I am happy that you got enjoyment out of my tale of the swashbuckling teddy
Comment from laren
All an adventure story, told through the eyes of a boy and his teddy bear. A delightful day to remember.
Cute and cuddly nursery poem!
Laren
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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All an adventure story, told through the eyes of a boy and his teddy bear. A delightful day to remember.
Cute and cuddly nursery poem!
Laren
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you, Laren for your kind words...
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Thank you for sharing,
Laren
Comment from waihekebach
This is a really cute children's poem with such lovely flow.
I would say that you are an expert at this.
Oh to be a child again.
Thank you for sharing with this big kid.
The best of contest luck.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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This is a really cute children's poem with such lovely flow.
I would say that you are an expert at this.
Oh to be a child again.
Thank you for sharing with this big kid.
The best of contest luck.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you. Expert? Mayne, or perhaps just a big kid.
Comment from Linda England Bonam
Very cute children's bear story. I enjoyed reading the delightful fun of it, and I am sure that children would love this little poem, too.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Very cute children's bear story. I enjoyed reading the delightful fun of it, and I am sure that children would love this little poem, too.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you - I am glad you emjoyed this tale of the swash-buckling teddy...
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Teddy Bear' is a delightfully written piece. Not until reading this did I realize that a teddy bear's life was so exciting. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this standard.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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'Teddy Bear' is a delightfully written piece. Not until reading this did I realize that a teddy bear's life was so exciting. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this standard.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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Thank you, duchess.
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kiwisteveh, you're more than welcome.
Best wishes, the Duchess
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
very nicely and tightly constructed and written,
and a dream to read, to boot.
i'll be rooting for this.
muchly good luck! regards, eph.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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very nicely and tightly constructed and written,
and a dream to read, to boot.
i'll be rooting for this.
muchly good luck! regards, eph.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2011
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Thanks, eph - glad you enjoyed.
Comment from The Stranger
oh its a hard life being a teddy, always having to be whateves fantasy the baby has in store today, then you find out when it's time to play
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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oh its a hard life being a teddy, always having to be whateves fantasy the baby has in store today, then you find out when it's time to play
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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It's a tough life, but some-teddy's gotta do it! Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from seashellrees4
How cute! Shades of Christopher Robin and Pooh Bear! My favorite lines:
"Blackbeard again!" I think with a chuckle.
"Oh where is my swash? Oh, where is my buckle?"
The picture was precious and fit your poem perfectly
Luck in the contest
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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How cute! Shades of Christopher Robin and Pooh Bear! My favorite lines:
"Blackbeard again!" I think with a chuckle.
"Oh where is my swash? Oh, where is my buckle?"
The picture was precious and fit your poem perfectly
Luck in the contest
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thanks for your kind words.
Those lines are my favourite too.
Comment from Chris Tee
This is a delightful poem about the Teddy's day we have here old sport.
My grand children here enjoyed this so much and asked me to read it another two times. Well done with this splendid work.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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This is a delightful poem about the Teddy's day we have here old sport.
My grand children here enjoyed this so much and asked me to read it another two times. Well done with this splendid work.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thank you Chris. Glad to hear it has been successfully road-tested on genuine children!
