Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "No Such Thing As Angels"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from artemis53
Got it but as a former charge nurse in a Psych and Rehab hospital, I perceive this in a different way. I've seen my share of drinkers and druggers along with the families that feel a purpose by always being there for them.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Got it but as a former charge nurse in a Psych and Rehab hospital, I perceive this in a different way. I've seen my share of drinkers and druggers along with the families that feel a purpose by always being there for them.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Comment from ameen786
"My woman's wearing wings"--what a wonderful tribute to your better half! Your sincerity is nicely reflected in your verse with excellent rhyming. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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"My woman's wearing wings"--what a wonderful tribute to your better half! Your sincerity is nicely reflected in your verse with excellent rhyming. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Comment from Delahay
This does sound like a country western song looking for a singer. There is another site associated with this one called FanSong, but there does not seem to be a lot going on there. I tried it for a while but left. You may want to have a look though.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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This does sound like a country western song looking for a singer. There is another site associated with this one called FanSong, but there does not seem to be a lot going on there. I tried it for a while but left. You may want to have a look though.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
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Comment from Ben Colder
Sounds as he knows he has an Angel. One would think he would wish to please her by throwing Jack out the window. Besides, Jack has problem driving. Good strong worded poem.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Sounds as he knows he has an Angel. One would think he would wish to please her by throwing Jack out the window. Besides, Jack has problem driving. Good strong worded poem.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
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Comment from risktaker
this is well written. It is nice that he is honoring the loyalty of his wife in spite of him being an active alcoholic.He counts on her being there for him.this is a different viewpoint expressed than what I have read about alcoholics.Original and interesting.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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this is well written. It is nice that he is honoring the loyalty of his wife in spite of him being an active alcoholic.He counts on her being there for him.this is a different viewpoint expressed than what I have read about alcoholics.Original and interesting.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
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Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Always liked the stories told by Country Western artist..This is no different it tells a story that's for sure.. But the part of gettin down on your knees seems a bit far fetched when you consider that Jacke is your best friend.. You can't have both Think you should elaborate a bit more on that... Maybe in the next one you write Leave the bottle or she is leaving you..No one will put up with that forever and think forever never comes is what the Jack says to you... not your Queen..Just my take on this TK
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Always liked the stories told by Country Western artist..This is no different it tells a story that's for sure.. But the part of gettin down on your knees seems a bit far fetched when you consider that Jacke is your best friend.. You can't have both Think you should elaborate a bit more on that... Maybe in the next one you write Leave the bottle or she is leaving you..No one will put up with that forever and think forever never comes is what the Jack says to you... not your Queen..Just my take on this TK
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
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Comment from MelB
I'd get down on my bended knees begging her to stay. - This is just a suggestion, so use it or lose it, but I would change knees to knee. I think it flows better, but decision is yours of course.
Again, perfect lyrics for a country song. I found myself singing it in my head, even though I didn't know the melody. I had the mental picture of a guy playing a guitar while I was reading it. Can you tell I like country music? This woman truly is a saint. At least, he does realize that. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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I'd get down on my bended knees begging her to stay. - This is just a suggestion, so use it or lose it, but I would change knees to knee. I think it flows better, but decision is yours of course.
Again, perfect lyrics for a country song. I found myself singing it in my head, even though I didn't know the melody. I had the mental picture of a guy playing a guitar while I was reading it. Can you tell I like country music? This woman truly is a saint. At least, he does realize that. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments and continued support. Don't know what I would do without the many, many, many dedicated supporters of my Country lyrics I have on this site. I really do appreciate all of you so much.
Comment from jlsavell
Brett Mathew West, your lyrics are stunning. A man who writes such beauty for a woman is few and far between. Incredible is all I have to say.. absolutely.. jlsavell
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Brett Mathew West, your lyrics are stunning. A man who writes such beauty for a woman is few and far between. Incredible is all I have to say.. absolutely.. jlsavell
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I don't know why I go there it ain't the place I want to be.
(I'd put a comma after there.I felt the meaning was very clear without the explanation. This may be your best, but don't stop writing. You have true talent and I hope you continue to share it with us. Wonderful write, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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I don't know why I go there it ain't the place I want to be.
(I'd put a comma after there.I felt the meaning was very clear without the explanation. This may be your best, but don't stop writing. You have true talent and I hope you continue to share it with us. Wonderful write, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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I do not intend to stop writing my little ole Country music lyrics and posting them on this site. I would probably at this point be lynched by a whole lot of people on this site if I did so. Always appreciate your comments and your support. I really do.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Sorry there is only one way I could describe this situation...one of hypocrisy.what else would it be when you are gorging yourself on the bottle and comes home ,seeing her waiting and giving herself to you.
Disgusting.
There are angels, and there is one next to you or she would have left a long time ago.
As for the writing it is beautiful, delirious but goes down quite nicely to the end.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Sorry there is only one way I could describe this situation...one of hypocrisy.what else would it be when you are gorging yourself on the bottle and comes home ,seeing her waiting and giving herself to you.
Disgusting.
There are angels, and there is one next to you or she would have left a long time ago.
As for the writing it is beautiful, delirious but goes down quite nicely to the end.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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