Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "No Such Thing As Angels"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
126 total reviews
Comment from skye
Excellent. This is easy to read, easy to sing, and hard to realize it is a reality for so many.
Excellent repeating lines. These are my favorite.
The only peace I find here in the valley is when she gives herself to me.
There may be no such thing as angels but I got one here with me.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Excellent. This is easy to read, easy to sing, and hard to realize it is a reality for so many.
Excellent repeating lines. These are my favorite.
The only peace I find here in the valley is when she gives herself to me.
There may be no such thing as angels but I got one here with me.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Comment from Phoenix8
I love this, it is truly beautifully written. It is unusual to read about the struggle of alcoholism so well thought out. I love how the poem not only portrays his struggle but the patience and compassion in the wife. This was lovely. ð???
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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I love this, it is truly beautifully written. It is unusual to read about the struggle of alcoholism so well thought out. I love how the poem not only portrays his struggle but the patience and compassion in the wife. This was lovely. ð???
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
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Comment from harmony13
Excellent Lyrics! I really enjoyed the author's words. They were heart felt, strong, creative and thought provoking. The artwork is perfected and reflects the words of this song.
The words also reflect the theme of alcoholism.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Excellent Lyrics! I really enjoyed the author's words. They were heart felt, strong, creative and thought provoking. The artwork is perfected and reflects the words of this song.
The words also reflect the theme of alcoholism.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
nothing less than a six
this is by far the best lyrics and I want to hear them sung.
I had a friend here on fanstory that I put music to her words because they were wonderful and I sent them to her.
yours are ready to be finished...please do
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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nothing less than a six
this is by far the best lyrics and I want to hear them sung.
I had a friend here on fanstory that I put music to her words because they were wonderful and I sent them to her.
yours are ready to be finished...please do
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Comment from emkoutny
this is the second one of your songs that I have read and I enjoyed this one as well. It is like a "Stand by Your Man" from the man's point of view. I hope you have put it to music. It is as good as anything I hear on the radio.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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this is the second one of your songs that I have read and I enjoyed this one as well. It is like a "Stand by Your Man" from the man's point of view. I hope you have put it to music. It is as good as anything I hear on the radio.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
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Comment from vkmack
Wow! I wish I had a six to share. As a country music fan, I can honestly say that these struck me as classic lyrics. You've got the hardcore elements here. The tone and timber is just right. If only Keith Whitley were here to sing this one. It's got his voice written all over it. I love the chorus; those sorts of lyrics can be traced back to the Carters and came on up through Hank Sr and Johnny Cash.
Awesome job. Awesome.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Wow! I wish I had a six to share. As a country music fan, I can honestly say that these struck me as classic lyrics. You've got the hardcore elements here. The tone and timber is just right. If only Keith Whitley were here to sing this one. It's got his voice written all over it. I love the chorus; those sorts of lyrics can be traced back to the Carters and came on up through Hank Sr and Johnny Cash.
Awesome job. Awesome.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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You are talking my kind of Country Music. Thank you for your comments and support. Appreciate them very much indeed.
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You are so welcome. You are writing my kind of lyrics!
Have a great day, Brett. And keep writing!
Comment from Liilia
Awesome poem/song here. I kept reading and seeing so clearly the scenes - the sadness, the walls closing in, the patience of the woman, the heartbreak of the situation, knowing it will not change. The fear that she may leave one day. Love how you ended with the same verse - it kind of pulls it all together. The scenario is very believable and must happen quite a lot. Am glad that you can focus on a particular genre, which makes your work so much more believable and strong. Thank you very much for using my collage to illustrate. It is much appreciated and I am honored. Luv, Liilia
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Awesome poem/song here. I kept reading and seeing so clearly the scenes - the sadness, the walls closing in, the patience of the woman, the heartbreak of the situation, knowing it will not change. The fear that she may leave one day. Love how you ended with the same verse - it kind of pulls it all together. The scenario is very believable and must happen quite a lot. Am glad that you can focus on a particular genre, which makes your work so much more believable and strong. Thank you very much for using my collage to illustrate. It is much appreciated and I am honored. Luv, Liilia
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Your beautiful collage sets my lyrics apart. Thank you for providing them so I could use them. And, thank you for your comments and support. Appreciate them always.
Comment from sibhus
These are really good and I can definitely see this as a song. As I read along, I kinda had a little tune going in my head along with these words. Just my thought, but if you had a chorus line between your stanzas, you would have a great song. Seriously, I think you ought to check into finding some one that pays music and get these out there.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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These are really good and I can definitely see this as a song. As I read along, I kinda had a little tune going in my head along with these words. Just my thought, but if you had a chorus line between your stanzas, you would have a great song. Seriously, I think you ought to check into finding some one that pays music and get these out there.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Comment from nomi338
Your author's notes confirmed the very first opinion I had on reading your great lyrics. I thought, man this would really work as a Country Western song. Lo and behold that was the intention. In case no one has told you yet, they work very well. Good job.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Your author's notes confirmed the very first opinion I had on reading your great lyrics. I thought, man this would really work as a Country Western song. Lo and behold that was the intention. In case no one has told you yet, they work very well. Good job.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
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Comment from Thamp
I would like to write music but have no idea how. I do know that I like this piece of your very much. Will you put music to it or send to someone else to do. This fascinates me. Bottom line, I agree with you... it is very well done as a poem and story so it must be a great song. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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I would like to write music but have no idea how. I do know that I like this piece of your very much. Will you put music to it or send to someone else to do. This fascinates me. Bottom line, I agree with you... it is very well done as a poem and story so it must be a great song. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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