Comment from Genya

Excellent

What a lovely gruesome little story. Marrying for money, then getting rid of her so he could inherit. Love the visual in this, great pictures to go with the gruesome words that tell this scary little tale. Very descriptive throughout that certainly puts the shivers down the spine. On another note, I too am struggling with the new site. My pictures seem larger than the masterpieces hanging in the Louvre and I can't get my writing to go where I want it to go. Need lots of practise now before I post anything else. Anyway, back to horror...loved it. Genya

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

Comment from Jackarrie

Exceptional

I have read this in Classic which I prefer it to the awful new site I just cannot get along with it at all. Your work Dean is always soooo good, I enjoyed the story with your dark poem,

Well written and well displayed.
Mary

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Twenty years younger than her? She should have know he was after her money. Well he got it and will be paying for a long time! Muahahahaaa! He got his just rewards and she got even! HeeHeeHee! Pleasant screams Dean! :<))) Nancy

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

Comment from gypsycaravan

Excellent

Glad I didn't "off" my ex. He would have come back to do me in, I'm sure. Ha.
Excellent writing, Dean, and the graphics outstanding. Great job.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

---

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Thanks, gyspsycaravan, I appreciate it, and I'm really happy that you liked this one! :)

~Dean

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

(I see you've had to make the same notes I have started adding! Best I can tell - it has something to do with adding background tinting :-( Arrgh, now we have to tell them which format to read it in! )

A chilling tale my friend - and yet. . . iconic :-)
They say the past will come back to haunt you - and something or another about just rewards (heh heh heh) -
I guess you wanted to remind us! ;-)

P.S. Nice use of poison spirits :-)

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

---

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Thanks, Lorraine. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

Yeah, while I like the new layout and everything better, I hate the fact that it keeps messing with my formatting. It's getting really frustrating, to say the very least...G-R-R-r-r-r-r-r-r-r... :)

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hey Dean..First off, I enjoyed this...ah almonds, the smell of death and revenge and ...
I know I fanned you, twice now...so why is your stuff not showing on my inbox?
Glicthceeeeeeees
I am going slightly crazy witht the site. i have lost so much time and my computer went a little crazy as well...urgh
padumachitta

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

I read it on classic first LOL as 'new and improved' is rather an iffy proposition LOL. This is wonderfully done and your vividly creative imagination never ceases to amaze me. I love you choice of words as they are always brilliant and perfectly placed for maximum effect. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is yet another chilling tale that the author has created with this piece of work. I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Well done.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

---

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014

Thanks, Tomes, very much. As always, your comments and review are greatly appreciated, my friend. :} ~Dean

reply by Tomes Johnston on 07-Dec-2014

My pleasure

Comment from rjuselius

Exceptional

this is an exceptionally brilliant piece of horror/thriller poetry! never try to kill another soul because it will hunt her/his restless death until it will find peace. clever thing you have written dear dean!
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014

Comment from lancellot

Exceptional

Okay, that was so what I call righteous vengeance with a smooth spooky flavor. Nicely done, the lines were perfect and her dialogue flawless. Well done.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2014