Comment from Sarah Butterfly

Excellent

Funny and easily readable and understandable 5-7-5. Good combination of the picture and words. Good luck in the contest.

Kind regards

Sarah

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013

Thanks Sarah for your review and your good luck wishes. Have a great day my friend.

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

That lady is armed. Time to get your own beer. There are times when you know you have just pushed things a little too far. Better make up before you find yourself sleeping next to the frig of beer. Fun read.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013

Thanks Nellie for a great review, I appreciate it. And you're right about pushing things to far. I would never do that in real life, just had to come up with something humorous for this contest. Also, welcome to this site. I hope you have a long enjoyable stay my new friend. Have a great day.

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

Somehow that finger clad in dish gloves is scarier than a finger unadorned. Just keep a mini fridge with an extension cord by your recliner and all should be okay.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013

Thanks my friend for your review and the suggestion, but that finger has a way of showing up no matter what you do. Have a great day.

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

when you're done cleaning
and washing all the dishes
bring me a cold beer

LOL couldn't be said any better. LOL and they thought she was just here to clean. Ho ho ho.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013

Thanks my friend for your great review. Without you ladies, us menfolk would be completely lost. Have a nice day.

reply by Gungalo on 15-Oct-2013

LOL.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Amusing pairing of photo and poem, which is in good 5/7/5 syllable count
This guy is lucky that a gesture is all he got! LOL
You definitely made me laugh :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013

Thanks my friend, I'm glad it made you laugh. Remember, according to the experts, laughter extends the length of your life. Take care.

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Thanks for a chuckle to start the morning! Seems like I've seen that picture before. More times than I care to admit.
Great job! And I like the yellow snow too!

Thanks for the read!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013

Thanks Ric for your review, I appreciate it. Glad you got a chuckle from it. Remember, don't eat to much of that yellow snow! Also, welcome to this site. I hope you have a long enjoyable stay my friend.

reply by Ric Myworld on 15-Oct-2013

Thanks so much for the warm welcome!

Comment from simplyteresa

Excellent

As a mom in a house full of boys I have noticed that they honestly think since I'm "already up" that asking to be waited on is perfectly acceptable. Too funny :)

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013

Thank you Teresa, I'm glad you liked it. Also, I would like to apologize for all the "menfolk" who take advantage of you ladies. You have enough to do without waiting on us all the time. Thanks and have a great day.

reply by simplyteresa on 15-Oct-2013

It's all good, I do get 90% of the counter space in the bathroom, hehe.
Have a great day!

Comment from Silent1rose

Excellent

Lol Wow. This was amusing. Very good work. Your choice of words were great and it worked with making me smile lol. Good luck, hope you do good! ~ Rose

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

Thank you very much Rose for your nice comments, I appreciate it. Also, welcome to this site, have fun my friend. It's a great place to write.

reply by Silent1rose on 14-Oct-2013

Thank you. I enjoy it here! :)

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

We are certainly having fun and that is what it was intended to do. The haiku is a perfect syllable count 5-7-5 and the poem is indeed funny
all that I said was
when you finish your cleaning
bring me a cold beer

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 Comment Written 14-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

Thanks my friend for your great review, I appreciate it. Have a nice day.