Comment from Wendyanne

Exceptional

Hi Dean I thoroughly enjoyed your dark poem based on Greek mythology. Your imagery is vivid and there are some god examples of alliteration. Unfortunately my youngest brother decided to get on the Ferryman's ride when he was 33! Very sad!

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

Thank you very much for your exceptional rating and review, Wendyanne. They are truly appreciated, my friend. :) ~Dean

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, dean, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the death that comes for those who seek it and those who do not. I like your author notes. indeed, if this can save one life, it's all worth it.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

Thanks for your comments, sweetwoodjax.

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Dean - as always your work makes me shiver at times, spooky in so many levels. I loved the message within this as it bloomed later in your lines. Darkness and pain hit us all at certain times and that journey can be a lonely one without support.

As always your stark imagery, clear emotional hits of the dark side speak volumes to those of us who have walked them. Excellent post, well penned with your usual flare and drama.
Great job my friend and thanks for sharing.
Maureen

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

Thanks so much for taking time out to weigh in on this work for me, Mo. You're right, I didn't post this horror strictly for the sake of posting something horrific (in more ways than just the narrative, perhaps LOL), but to also make a statement and turn it into something positive, while still being entertaining to read.

Again, thanks for the review and kind comments. As always, they are appreciated. :}

~Dean

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

tis sad people end their life when their life is just beginning. it is sad they have to go through life with such stress and depression hanging over their shoulders.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

Yes, I think so, CRW. Thanks so much for your review. :}

Comment from Bill Schott

Exceptional

This a truly awesome poem that does covers many areas. The words themselves depict Death well and create his eerie presence in the world. "His fleshless face locked in an ethereal grin" The artwork is insane, and the placement of the kinescopes adds life, ironically, to this ode to Death. The thrust of the poem seems to be about suicide prevention. With the holidays here, that activity will be on the rise and it's good to remind people with loved ones who fit the statistics to be vigilant. Always a privilidge to witness your work, Dean.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

Thank you, Bill, as it is always a great privilege to receive your reviews, my friend.

You touched on some of the key points I wished to make in this poem, and suicide prevention was indeed my primary reasons for writing it they way I have. As you say, the holiday season is fast approaching, and while it is a most joyous occasion for most, is is the end of the line for others.

Thanks so much again for the exceptional rating and commentary. All are greatly appreciated. :}

~Dean

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Parents should be the first line of defense for a disturbed child. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

Yes, they should, Charlie, and I obviously agree.

Thanks so much for your kind comments. ~Dean

reply by c_lucas on 30-Nov-2014

You're welcome, Dean. Charlie

Comment from rjuselius

Exceptional

you have a knack for horror and thriller stories and the animations used enhance the eerie atmosphere of the poem! an interesting piece of poetic art and an example of good horror/thriller poetry!
thank you for sharing dear dean!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

Thank you for reading and commenting so positively, Rebekka. As always, your viewpoints and perspectives are always sincerely appreciated. :}

~Dean

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

There is so many young ones these days, thinking they have nothing to live for. It is so sad. Excellent poem, with a good message after giving the awful bit at the beginning. If youngsters could just see what they are giving up, really giving up, without trying, there would be less suicides.
xsx Sandra.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, Sandra, and I happen to think so. Such is the cyber society in which we all share and live in today.

Much appreciated. :} ~Dean

Comment from ravim

Excellent

More like it. In the hell hole, but still holding on to the truth of the world. Your advice not to jump into the Ferryman ride is a timely one. For you never know the boneset of the King of the Stygian Kingdoms. There is horror and pathos in abundant measure. Plus something to sooth the nerves of the distraught parents. As usual, an unusual stuff!

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

Thanks very much, ravim, and I thrive on the "unusual", LOL. Hey, why be normal? There's too many of you "normal" people walking around now as it is!

In all seriousness, I sincerely appreciate you taking the time to R&R this poem. It is appreciated. :}

~Dean

Comment from dmt1967

Exceptional

This is a really good poem my friend. I love the pictures as well. They compliment the poem very well. The music scared me too much though lol, I will be having nightmares tonight. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

You're too kind, dmt, but I truly do appreciate your kindness. I'm very happy that you enjoyed the presentation as a whole. Thanks so much for your glowing comments and exceptional rating.

All the best to you & yours~ Dean :}