I Asked For That One
Contest Entry109 total reviews
Comment from lorijean
Are you still alive? loved your poem it came across well and had me howling, loved the picture just perfect.....thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Are you still alive? loved your poem it came across well and had me howling, loved the picture just perfect.....thank you for sharing
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thanks Lorijean, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll be sleeping on the couch for awhile (ha). Take care my friend and have a nice day.
Comment from Debra White
This is the only one that made me laugh out loud! The illustration is obviously integral to the overall thing, but I loved this! Reminded me of my own domestic situation lol! Perfect adherence to syllable count. Good luck in the contest, Debra :)
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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This is the only one that made me laugh out loud! The illustration is obviously integral to the overall thing, but I loved this! Reminded me of my own domestic situation lol! Perfect adherence to syllable count. Good luck in the contest, Debra :)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thanks Debra for your excellent review, I really appreciate your nice comments. A good picture is worth a thousand words. Have a real nice day. Cheers.
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Congrats on the win! I love your humour :)
Comment from ElegantButler
Sure. I'll bring your beer. Let me get it ready for you by setting it down upon the still-warm stove while I scrub this pan from the spare ribs you insisted we have. (smirk)
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Sure. I'll bring your beer. Let me get it ready for you by setting it down upon the still-warm stove while I scrub this pan from the spare ribs you insisted we have. (smirk)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thanks for your comical review (I think). You know how insensitive men can be at times, but what would we do without you gals?
Comment from boxergirl
when you're done cleaning
and washing all the dishes
bring me a cold beer
What more can I say! This is perfectly worded with picture to match. Great job and you get my vote!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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when you're done cleaning
and washing all the dishes
bring me a cold beer
What more can I say! This is perfectly worded with picture to match. Great job and you get my vote!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thank you my friend for your review and support, I really appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from starkat
yep, bring me a cold beer and the remote .. also, you can rake the leaves till halftime when the Papa John's pizza will be ready for you to pick up -
very funny ... from the guy's point of view
artwork is the perfect reaction to his sensitive words
delightful 'Just for Fun' - great for a chuckle
excellent contest entry ... ;o)
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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yep, bring me a cold beer and the remote .. also, you can rake the leaves till halftime when the Papa John's pizza will be ready for you to pick up -
very funny ... from the guy's point of view
artwork is the perfect reaction to his sensitive words
delightful 'Just for Fun' - great for a chuckle
excellent contest entry ... ;o)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thank you for your review, I'm glad you got a chuckle from it. Take care my friend and have a nice day.
Comment from l.raven
OK This is a winner...my daughter won't let her husband put up his middle finger...so he puts up the three middle ones and tells her to read between the lines...LOL I love this poem. very cute and very well thought of...
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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OK This is a winner...my daughter won't let her husband put up his middle finger...so he puts up the three middle ones and tells her to read between the lines...LOL I love this poem. very cute and very well thought of...
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thank you my old friend, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Once I saw that picture, the words just popped into my head. Take care of yourself.
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Hi Bill, I knew this was a winner...had to vote for it....CONGRATULATIONS...luff ya sweetie...xxoo
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Now this is a good one. You have made good use of every syllable in this comical little scenario in which words weren't needed to make the point.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Now this is a good one. You have made good use of every syllable in this comical little scenario in which words weren't needed to make the point.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thanks Janice for your review, I appreciate your nice comments. Have a great day my friend.
Comment from Martin Chan
This is a humor 5-7-5 poem written for the contest entry. It has a good humor element and composed with nice flow of words. A good imagination and the picture fully complements the story.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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This is a humor 5-7-5 poem written for the contest entry. It has a good humor element and composed with nice flow of words. A good imagination and the picture fully complements the story.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thank you Martin for your review, I appreciate it. Have a nice day my friend.
Comment from rouskin
when you're done cleaning
and washing all the dishes
bring me a cold beer
Simply great! If I had 6* I would give them to you.
Your words and picture brought my smiling face back.
Real masterpiece.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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when you're done cleaning
and washing all the dishes
bring me a cold beer
Simply great! If I had 6* I would give them to you.
Your words and picture brought my smiling face back.
Real masterpiece.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thanks my friend. It's good to hear that it made you laugh, laughing makes you feel better. And thanks for the offer of a six, I appreciate that also. Have a great day my friend.
Comment from rockmann
Dude, you are in deep shit, but you did succeed in making me smile. I would never, well, almost never, tell my wife to do that. She is able to read my mind and knows I can't get my own beer unless I get off my lazy ass and put the remote down.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Dude, you are in deep shit, but you did succeed in making me smile. I would never, well, almost never, tell my wife to do that. She is able to read my mind and knows I can't get my own beer unless I get off my lazy ass and put the remote down.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thanks my man for your hilarious review, I appreciate it. I'm glad it made you smile. Hey, when you've been married for forty years, you sort of get use to doing things a certain way (ha). Have a good day my friend.