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Penpal
This was well thought out, interesting, and an all around enjoyeable read. It got the author's message accross with the perks of creative word choices and humor. I liked it. It can also be helpful to people like me, who are creative yet need some polishing up on the fundament rules and etiquette of writing.
Sally Saucer
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2007
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2007
Thank you so much, Sally, for your kind comments. I hope to have you for the remaining chapters.
Jay