This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "What's Going On?!"Third book in the time travel trilogy
30 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Whoa!! I did NOT anticipate this! You never stop with the imaginative story line! I'm not really wanting this beautiful novel to finish, and yet, with only one more chapter to go, THE chapter that sews all the loose ends up, I must forge onward. xo
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Whoa!! I did NOT anticipate this! You never stop with the imaginative story line! I'm not really wanting this beautiful novel to finish, and yet, with only one more chapter to go, THE chapter that sews all the loose ends up, I must forge onward. xo
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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It was a good place to end this part, wasn't it! Even I was surprised, lol. :)) xxxx
Comment from tfawcus
This is rolling on towards a splendid conclusion. I like the way you suggest that the Powers That Be have found a solution - without actually telling us what it is!
Great emotional content in this chapter. As always, much enjoyed.
Just one thing you might like to have a look at - the change of tense here:
There was nothing I could do but leave it in the hands of the Powers That Be and hope nothing goes (went?) wrong.
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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This is rolling on towards a splendid conclusion. I like the way you suggest that the Powers That Be have found a solution - without actually telling us what it is!
Great emotional content in this chapter. As always, much enjoyed.
Just one thing you might like to have a look at - the change of tense here:
There was nothing I could do but leave it in the hands of the Powers That Be and hope nothing goes (went?) wrong.
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you so very much for this lovely review, Tony, and all the shiny stars. I've missed my weekly fix of your story, have you been away? Or poorly? Thank you for pointing that tense change, that was so helpful. Sometimes I find when I've been over and over it, I stop 'seeing' the obvious. Does that make sense? lol. I've made the correction now, thanks my friend. Big hugs. Sandra xx
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Have just returned from a 5,000 km drive across to Brisbane. The things we do for our children! LOL We?ve also returned with a virulent ?flu virus - so you are right on both counts. Hoping to be back on line before too much longer.
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My goodness, that is one hell of a drive! And to drive all that way and pick up a virus, well, that's just not on!! I hope you get rid of it soon. xxx
Comment from wordsfromsue
Aw, I see Mildred is going to have a peaceful, love-filled life with her Honey.
That's awesome, Sandra! I'll miss Mildred in the present time, but glad she's getting this opportunity.
Yer dun well, Miss Sandra!
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Aw, I see Mildred is going to have a peaceful, love-filled life with her Honey.
That's awesome, Sandra! I'll miss Mildred in the present time, but glad she's getting this opportunity.
Yer dun well, Miss Sandra!
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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I wasn't going to reply to this one until you had read the last part. Now you know Mildred is still going to be around, leaving me an opening if I want it. Thanks, dear friend, for the 6 stars and the lovely review. Big hugs. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from MsPetra
You have this offering moving along nicely.
I thought it to be a bit confusing at first, but then I realized that if I had read the other 45 parts it would be as clear as sunshine.
I didn't see anything that needed changing. Your grammar and punctuation were great. I am looking forward to part 47.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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You have this offering moving along nicely.
I thought it to be a bit confusing at first, but then I realized that if I had read the other 45 parts it would be as clear as sunshine.
I didn't see anything that needed changing. Your grammar and punctuation were great. I am looking forward to part 47.
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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LOL! Yes, it does help reading the previous parts. Not only that, although they are stand-alone books, this one is the final book in the trilogy and tomorrow will be the final chapter. I'm glad you were able to read this part and not be too overwhelmed, that is really encouraging. Thank you so much for reading. I really appreciate that. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from sandragee
Happy endings for everyone except Charles. The Powers-to-be are giddy about Veronica and Mildred stopping the glitch in the timeline, the Earth's future for the coming millennium is assured, and Mildred gets to keep her Tommy. Yay!
Great job. I'm going to miss these ladies.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Happy endings for everyone except Charles. The Powers-to-be are giddy about Veronica and Mildred stopping the glitch in the timeline, the Earth's future for the coming millennium is assured, and Mildred gets to keep her Tommy. Yay!
Great job. I'm going to miss these ladies.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you so much, Sandra, what a lovely review. I have the final chapter on Sunday, which I think will surprise everyone. Although this is the end of the trilogy, Mildred keeps hammering in my brain with some new stories for another series. I'll see how it goes later in the year. In the meantime, I'm going to write a few more stories for my Grandson, and some poetry. Thanks again, my friend, it's so nice to know you'll miss them, that's a great compliment. Big hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from alexisleech
What a wonderful twist to this fabulous book! I knew would come up with something spectacular, and I'm sure the final chapter will deliver just that. I can't wait to order it from Amazon when you get it published!
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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What a wonderful twist to this fabulous book! I knew would come up with something spectacular, and I'm sure the final chapter will deliver just that. I can't wait to order it from Amazon when you get it published!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you so very much for the lovely six stars, Alexis, and the wonderful review. Last part coming on Sunday!! Hope to see you there. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Sandra,
very nice continuation here. I had an inkling Mildred may be staying behind for a spell earlier on. I'm guessing it won't crew anything up. lol
as we expected ... bearing in mind, ..." Leif said- I don't think you need the comma and ellipsis here.
my way through the rooms. With no sign of Tommy downstairs, I made my way up to the bedrooms - may avoid the repetition of 'made my way' by changing the second to continued.
All the best
G
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Hi Sandra,
very nice continuation here. I had an inkling Mildred may be staying behind for a spell earlier on. I'm guessing it won't crew anything up. lol
as we expected ... bearing in mind, ..." Leif said- I don't think you need the comma and ellipsis here.
my way through the rooms. With no sign of Tommy downstairs, I made my way up to the bedrooms - may avoid the repetition of 'made my way' by changing the second to continued.
All the best
G
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you so much, Gareth, I've nipped back and corrected those errors. The very last episode is coming on Sunday, I'm looking forward to the reaction I'm sure to get. :)) Big hugs, my friend. xxx
Comment from Heather Knight
Poor Veronica, frightened by the paintings on the walls! I understand the feeling though.
Interesting proposal... :) They seem to be very much in love.
Happy ending. Good! At least in this chapter...
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Poor Veronica, frightened by the paintings on the walls! I understand the feeling though.
Interesting proposal... :) They seem to be very much in love.
Happy ending. Good! At least in this chapter...
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you so much, Maria. The very last part is coming on Sunday with a few surprises. Can't wait to read the response. Big hugs, my friend. xxx
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Take care.
Comment from SLMorrical
A very interesting chapter. It seems the powers to be are letting Mildred stay in that time with Tommy. I also see how the time goes by fast so that Mildred will be in the same time a Veronica I think. This flows well. I think it is interesting in just a split second Veronica is seeing an older Mildred. I use to not like time travel stories, but yours has gotten my attention, and I keep looking forward to another chapter. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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A very interesting chapter. It seems the powers to be are letting Mildred stay in that time with Tommy. I also see how the time goes by fast so that Mildred will be in the same time a Veronica I think. This flows well. I think it is interesting in just a split second Veronica is seeing an older Mildred. I use to not like time travel stories, but yours has gotten my attention, and I keep looking forward to another chapter. Well done.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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What a lovely review, thank you so much, Sandra. The last chapter is coming on Sunday, and then that will be it. Well, it will be unless Mildred gets her way. She keeps putting ideas in my head for another series. We'll see. Thank you so much for the six stars, my friend, and the compliment, I really appreciate all you've said. Big hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-That is a good question,
for the chapter, Sandra.
-That is what we want to know!
-The Powers say we will be"shocked,
but pleased" so I am putting my faith in that.
-I like how Ver. is now thinking of going
home to be with her own family.
-I think she has had enough of Charles.
-But there is still Mildred's
situation to be resolved.
-I think she is reeling over Tommy.
-You describe the scene in a
loving and caring way.
-Mildred even answers Tommy's
question before he finished it.
-Mildred is quite happy about it, but
then what is it that has happened
at the end to cause this change?
-That is what we want to know.
-Looking forward to that
time this time around!
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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-That is a good question,
for the chapter, Sandra.
-That is what we want to know!
-The Powers say we will be"shocked,
but pleased" so I am putting my faith in that.
-I like how Ver. is now thinking of going
home to be with her own family.
-I think she has had enough of Charles.
-But there is still Mildred's
situation to be resolved.
-I think she is reeling over Tommy.
-You describe the scene in a
loving and caring way.
-Mildred even answers Tommy's
question before he finished it.
-Mildred is quite happy about it, but
then what is it that has happened
at the end to cause this change?
-That is what we want to know.
-Looking forward to that
time this time around!
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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That Time - This Time Round! What a fabulous title for the next series ... should Mildred insist on one. lol. Thank you so much, my dear friend, for another wonderful review. I can't begin to tell you how pleased I am that you enjoyed this part. The next part, the final part, is rather long, as I've decided not to do an epilogue. :)) I thought everyone would rather know the outcome of everything in this last one. Biggest hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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I thought that was a catchy little ending, but didn't think of it as a title!! You never know about Mildred; she is quite unpredictable at times.
You are very welcome for the review. Yes, we would rather know the outcome. Looking forward to it, my friend.