A visit to Grandad
Nothing like the truth19 total reviews
Comment from Alex Rosel
Ha, ha. That raised a smile on my face. Flash fiction usually depends on a good culminating twist, and you got one here :)
Oh, and my father actually was a cook in the World War II -- I never asked him if he killed anyone, though.
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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Ha, ha. That raised a smile on my face. Flash fiction usually depends on a good culminating twist, and you got one here :)
Oh, and my father actually was a cook in the World War II -- I never asked him if he killed anyone, though.
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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Thanks Alex. Jen
Comment from Cedar
Thanks for the laugh on this beautiful spring morning. I'm an old Vietnam vet and have experienced a few of those meals..LOL.
But, basically, unless you were on the front-line, we were very well fed.
Congratulations on a great win and thanks again for the laugh, I needed that...Bill
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the laugh on this beautiful spring morning. I'm an old Vietnam vet and have experienced a few of those meals..LOL.
But, basically, unless you were on the front-line, we were very well fed.
Congratulations on a great win and thanks again for the laugh, I needed that...Bill
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much Bill foryour great review and super 6* Take care. Jen.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Hahaha! Nice complimentary artwork. I enjoyed reading your story . No edits or adjustments necessary. Congratulations on the contest win!!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Hahaha! Nice complimentary artwork. I enjoyed reading your story . No edits or adjustments necessary. Congratulations on the contest win!!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
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Many thanks. Jen
Comment from Bill Schott
This sixty-word story, A Visit to Granddad, has the right word count and takes the question and answer time for veterans and their kids to this sublime and comfortable place. Funny!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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This sixty-word story, A Visit to Granddad, has the right word count and takes the question and answer time for veterans and their kids to this sublime and comfortable place. Funny!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Many thanks Bill.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author
Wa ha ha! This is a great flash write. I can only imagine the look on the kid's face. LOL You are really good working with humor. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hi Contest Author
Wa ha ha! This is a great flash write. I can only imagine the look on the kid's face. LOL You are really good working with humor. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan :-)
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Thanks Jan forcthe great review
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your short story.
It is entertaining and well written.
Nice touch of humour to lighten a sober subject.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your short story.
It is entertaining and well written.
Nice touch of humour to lighten a sober subject.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Many 5hanks for the great review
Comment from Bill Pinder
This is a humorous entry for this contest. It reminds me of watching MASH and all the shows where they made jokes about the terrible food. Those were classics. Good luck in the contest!
Bill
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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This is a humorous entry for this contest. It reminds me of watching MASH and all the shows where they made jokes about the terrible food. Those were classics. Good luck in the contest!
Bill
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Well that was a switch. Good imagination and to the point. How many we wonder have been the subject of the army MESS and picked up the beginning of their end?
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Well that was a switch. Good imagination and to the point. How many we wonder have been the subject of the army MESS and picked up the beginning of their end?
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from LIJ Red
In the snotty shore-bound rate I was in, I ate better in the galley than ever before, but we griped anyway...excellent sixty word dash...is that like an overweight fifty word dribble flash?
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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In the snotty shore-bound rate I was in, I ate better in the galley than ever before, but we griped anyway...excellent sixty word dash...is that like an overweight fifty word dribble flash?
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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I guess it is. Thanks a lot for the review.
Comment from LisaMay
This is a clever write... Granddad has a sense of humour and obviously doesn't rate his culinary skills very highly. Your story deserves to do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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This is a clever write... Granddad has a sense of humour and obviously doesn't rate his culinary skills very highly. Your story deserves to do well in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
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Many thanks