This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "What's Going On?"Third book in the time travel trilogy
32 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Hmmmm! This is getting curiouser and curiouser!! It continues to be a Can't-Put-It-Down kind of work, though. I'm going to read "just one more"...but if I'm still here reading when my husband comes home from work in a few hours, Sandra, I am SOO going to share the blame with you. Just so you know! xo
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Hmmmm! This is getting curiouser and curiouser!! It continues to be a Can't-Put-It-Down kind of work, though. I'm going to read "just one more"...but if I'm still here reading when my husband comes home from work in a few hours, Sandra, I am SOO going to share the blame with you. Just so you know! xo
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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You are so good reading all these without any reward. Thank you again! :)) xxxxx
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I certainly don't need a reward for reading these!! The reward is in the story -- and that's no schmooze!! I'm totally into the saga!! It's fantastic reading!! xo
Comment from wordsfromsue
Okay. I'm totally confused!!!! What does everything mean at the end?
What catastrophe has happened, that I haven't figured out, yet?
I'm glad I don't have to wait a week, to find out!!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
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Okay. I'm totally confused!!!! What does everything mean at the end?
What catastrophe has happened, that I haven't figured out, yet?
I'm glad I don't have to wait a week, to find out!!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
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it's going to get worse before it gets better! Poor Veronica is in a right mess. Thank you so very much, my wonderful friend, for giving me another 6 stars with your lovely review. So, are you enjoying it? lol, Big hugs my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from l.raven
HI Sandra, I must agree with Veronica...
what in the world( or where ever she is)maybe not this world...is going on...why was she sent so far back????...and then there is Mildred...Oh Lordy...what is going on sweet girl????....me oh my...I'm sooooo confused...but I always am...LOL...you really need to drop ME more hints...LOL...I love your story my sweet wonderful friend...and am of to read the other one...love you sooooo very much you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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HI Sandra, I must agree with Veronica...
what in the world( or where ever she is)maybe not this world...is going on...why was she sent so far back????...and then there is Mildred...Oh Lordy...what is going on sweet girl????....me oh my...I'm sooooo confused...but I always am...LOL...you really need to drop ME more hints...LOL...I love your story my sweet wonderful friend...and am of to read the other one...love you sooooo very much you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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You're allowed to be confused, Linda, LOL, if I am, you should be. Poor Veronica thinks she's going mad, and Mildred is sure she is. LOL. Thank you so much my friend, for another really lovely, fun review. There will be a few more questions and hopefully you will be a tiny bit less confused by the end of the next part. It will depend on how confused I am!! LOL, LOL. Big hugs, my lovely friend, love you lots! Big hugs to Noah. :)) Sandra xxx
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LOL Sandra...you want to see confused...let me write it...LOL...your doing an awesome job sweet girl...and I am loving it...I'm going to go read the other chapter...I started last night...and some one came over...gurrrrrr....LOL...biggest hugs back at you...and I will have Kristy hug Noah for both of us...smiling big you...loveeeeee you soooooo much...xxoo
Comment from Chrissy710
Oh Lordy, Sandra What's next I have just read all the other chapters to catch up and Give you a six star for every one of them But this one will carry the rest for me. I love this story and so pleased to have caught up I hope. Well done a terrific story full of surprises and excellent prose and just so exciting. I am really looking forward to the next Chapter.
Foot note I have recently broken my leg 12 days ago and so laid up and resting I tripped down a step in my daughters garage and landed on my left leg and knee and after having Xrays it is broken undisplaced but I am having screws inserted on Monday coming to keep it stable and enable a quicker recovery. So I have time up my sleeve npw and hense the chance to catch up on your story Which I have wanted to do for ages. You are a terrific writer and Deserve all the accolades you get. so awaiting next Chapter Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018
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Oh Lordy, Sandra What's next I have just read all the other chapters to catch up and Give you a six star for every one of them But this one will carry the rest for me. I love this story and so pleased to have caught up I hope. Well done a terrific story full of surprises and excellent prose and just so exciting. I am really looking forward to the next Chapter.
Foot note I have recently broken my leg 12 days ago and so laid up and resting I tripped down a step in my daughters garage and landed on my left leg and knee and after having Xrays it is broken undisplaced but I am having screws inserted on Monday coming to keep it stable and enable a quicker recovery. So I have time up my sleeve npw and hense the chance to catch up on your story Which I have wanted to do for ages. You are a terrific writer and Deserve all the accolades you get. so awaiting next Chapter Cheers Christine
Comment Written 23-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018
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Aww, Christine, what an awful thing to happen! Are you in much pain? That must have hurt you when it happened. Makes me shudder just thinking of it. I hope you do have a speedy recovery, you have Christmas coming up!
Thank you so much for reading all those chapters, you have really made my day and put a ginormous smile on my face. Thank you for the six stars, too; you are so sweet! Biggest hugs, my friend! Take care of yourself. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Zue65
Oh my, the saga of the time traveller in the person of Veronica will always be exciting, adventurous and mysterious. I won't tire reading yours as you inject more twists and turns in this story. Thanks for sharing an excellent write.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Oh my, the saga of the time traveller in the person of Veronica will always be exciting, adventurous and mysterious. I won't tire reading yours as you inject more twists and turns in this story. Thanks for sharing an excellent write.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, Susan, I really appreciate your support. Veronica has a lot more to learn, not all of it what she wants to hear! Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh my land I can certainly see how time and space might do a little happy dance in between time jumps, but it must be most disorienting and you've written this with great aplomb and fine craftmanship.
I can hardly wait to find out what happened.
Built in suspense perfectly done. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Oh my land I can certainly see how time and space might do a little happy dance in between time jumps, but it must be most disorienting and you've written this with great aplomb and fine craftmanship.
I can hardly wait to find out what happened.
Built in suspense perfectly done. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much, Gloria. It's going to be a tough assignment this time. Veronica will learn more in the next part. I'm so pleased you are enjoying this story, thanks, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello sandramitchell
My what an interesting chapter to read, it gave me an eerie feeling and how you had Veronica trying to figure what year she was in was great and kept me very intrigued. Gert
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Hello sandramitchell
My what an interesting chapter to read, it gave me an eerie feeling and how you had Veronica trying to figure what year she was in was great and kept me very intrigued. Gert
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Thank you so very much, Gert, for the wonderful 6 stars! And a big hug for the lovely review. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. From now on, Veronica will be collecting the clues to find out what happened and how she can change it. Such fun ahead. :)) Sandra xxx
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You are welcome Sandra
Gert
Comment from rspoet
Oh Lordy, Miss Sandra's gone and loss her mind. Must be all that time traveling. It can play tricks with ya mind, ya know. This time, that time, somewhere in time.
Well, this certainly changes things a bit. Mildred is back in the past. Veronica is traveling alone.
It seems new realities are opening up. Maybe they changed time with too much meddling in the past. That is always the danger of interacting with the past, you also change the future and with dire consequences.
A reminder from The Powers? Who knows?
A well written chapter, back to the original setting of the book. Or is it? It's good to see Veronica back in a leading role.
Most enjoyable, my friend
Robert
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Oh Lordy, Miss Sandra's gone and loss her mind. Must be all that time traveling. It can play tricks with ya mind, ya know. This time, that time, somewhere in time.
Well, this certainly changes things a bit. Mildred is back in the past. Veronica is traveling alone.
It seems new realities are opening up. Maybe they changed time with too much meddling in the past. That is always the danger of interacting with the past, you also change the future and with dire consequences.
A reminder from The Powers? Who knows?
A well written chapter, back to the original setting of the book. Or is it? It's good to see Veronica back in a leading role.
Most enjoyable, my friend
Robert
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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You have to have a muddled mind to write these books, LOL! Thank you so much for this lovely six stars, and the lovely review.
Veronica will learn a little bit in the next part, but she'll still be confused, and Mildred will be confused because Veronica is confused. Now I'm confused!! LOL. I'm glad you enjoyed this part, thank you, my friend. Thank you! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-This is a good chapter that shows a lot of
Ver.'s thoughts, fears, and emotion, Sandra.
-I like how you include some of her favorite
memories, like the cushion she worked
on while pregnant with Michael.
-It is certainly a different situation for
her to be in since she didn't go back in
time the way she usually did.
-You created her panic very well when
she didn't know where Mildred was.
-She comes in just at the right moment
to offer comfort, but soon after that,
there were too many realizations for Ver.
about the time, and what that meant.
-I am sure it will all become clear, and
then the hard work will need to be done.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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-This is a good chapter that shows a lot of
Ver.'s thoughts, fears, and emotion, Sandra.
-I like how you include some of her favorite
memories, like the cushion she worked
on while pregnant with Michael.
-It is certainly a different situation for
her to be in since she didn't go back in
time the way she usually did.
-You created her panic very well when
she didn't know where Mildred was.
-She comes in just at the right moment
to offer comfort, but soon after that,
there were too many realizations for Ver.
about the time, and what that meant.
-I am sure it will all become clear, and
then the hard work will need to be done.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Veronica is in a strange place at the moment, Pam, she doesn't know whats happening now. Mildred is also confused so between the two of them it's going to be a fun part to write. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part, thank you so very much for the lovely six stars, and for the wonderful review. Biggest hugs, my lovely friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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It sounds like a lot of confusion. It should be fun sorting it all out. You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, my friend.
Comment from meeshu
this has got to be an eerie feeling, being lost in time. not knowing When you are! much worse than waking in someone's bed and not knowing whose ( that only happened a couple times). great write, Sandra.............meeshu
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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this has got to be an eerie feeling, being lost in time. not knowing When you are! much worse than waking in someone's bed and not knowing whose ( that only happened a couple times). great write, Sandra.............meeshu
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much, Meeshu. I think I'd be scared to death if that happened to me. But, I wouldn't mind travelling back in time to when I was a bit younger. :)) I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks my friend. :) Sandra xx